Good stuff so far. I'm not a huge fan of goth Mandy. Maybe later we can turn her into a bimbo, or like dress like a good church going girl, which would fit with the others... you know for a cover story.
The MC is supposed to be injured. He should have at least a cane, or complain about his back or something.
Then maybe have some elements of the original such as mess up their homework so they get kicked out of school and get good and desperate for money, increasingly sluttier maid outfit, letting them catch you watching porn, and sleeping pill fun time is always a classic.
The MC is supposed to be injured. He should have at least a cane, or complain about his back or something.
Then maybe have some elements of the original such as mess up their homework so they get kicked out of school and get good and desperate for money, increasingly sluttier maid outfit, letting them catch you watching porn, and sleeping pill fun time is always a classic.