Ren'Py - Completed - Personal Trainer [v1.1.1] [Domiek]

This is an absolutely amazing game, and is now one of my top favorites. Easily in my top 3.
The premise of the game is fantastic. Seriously, how hot is this: guy gets cheated on by his fiance', crashes/burns, gets taken in by his cousin, decides to play gay so can get a job at the local female only gym, decides to bang em all?! Domiek does a superb job making it believable, fun, and sexy...all without making you despise the mc in the process.
The artwork is delicious, hot af, and realistic. I love that the milfs don't actually look like uber hot 20 year olds. Don't misunderstand, they are still uber hot, but they actually look like milfs, not pinup models. I find that very exciting and hot. And yes, some of the characters do look like pinup babes, which is spectacular because their appearance fits them story-wise. Very refreshing.
The dialogue is spot on, easily readable and error free which is a rare treat amidst all the games where you struggle through poor English translations. On top of that, it is a fun read, meaning it doesn't sound like something a middle school boy wrote. It is smart, fun and witty.
The hint system is spectacular. I love that it allows you to explore the game, wander around and see the sights without worrying about getting lost/missing something.
Best of all are the wide variety of characters. Each character has a personality and reacts accordingly, making for a very fun experience. I cannot overstate this...the different characters and their back stories impact how they act and how the game progresses with the mc. And, as I mentioned, the artwork for each character is smoking hot while still being believable.
Tons of fun. I particularly like the Amy storyline, as well as the growing tension between the MC and his cousin. And the mystery surrounding the boss is promising to be quite hot as well.
I have lost track of how many games I've downloaded and played...in fact I should probably should delete a few gigs worth off of my hard drive. But this one stays for sure, in my favorites folder. Top tier game!!! My highest recommendation.
And I'm eagerly looking forward to more from Domiek

An enjoyable, fun and really intelligent games in its construction and writing.

Technically it starts already well, the last two updates up the bar several notches, some renders being visually sumptuous.The lighting on certain sequences are magnificent.
Facial expressions used extensively, and with great intelligence give life to the characters. One of the games using them the best.

The story is filled with references and hilarious scenes, the insolence of the MC is quite enjoyable, he dares everything and is not ashamed of anything.
The female characters may seem stereotyped at first glance, but it is to better deformed these stereotypes, giving place to hilarious sequences and well imagined. Difficult to talk about it without spoiler


A game to watch closely, which takes quality in each update and is already unique by its humor and tone, and by its very very hot scene.

Review for V 0.24 (about six months of development)
- Story 5/10: The basic plot is the same of al lot of games: the MC, a man (not a boy this time), starts a new life living with a female relative and surrounded of attractive women. There is a small twist because he has to pretend to be gay in order getting a job , but fortunately, this is forgotten really soon. After that, the different plots are mostly light and easy ones: the MC knows a woman, seduce (too easily) or help her, and fuck her. I would prefer a bit more complexity in the plot and the situations, but it happens to me with 90% of erotic games, and this is not worse than most of them. Rather the opposite.
- Characters and 3D models: 9/10: There are two great characters in this game: the female cousing and Amy. The female cousin is a real good (although a bit conventional) 3D model with a funny sparkling and sometimes ironic personality . Amy is a middle aged redhead with an almost perfect and unique 3D design and a shy-in-the-surface-but-kinky-in-the-deep personality . Her dirty talking scenes are THE BEST in the game.
There are other secondary feminine characters not so interesting and alluring, but good ones, specially a kinky old black lady. That's the main virtue of the game: the diversity of ages, faces and bodies of the female in the game . Forget about all the females looking like siliconed pornstars or teenager top-models, as happens in most of the games. This one is different, and better. It seems other characters are going to be introduced... and I don't know if that's a good thing. I would prefer that the story and characters of the cousin and Amy were developed to the max before introducing other main plots and characters.
- Playability: 6/10: Too much grind right now. It's supposed that there will be less grind in the future when more events will be introduced. So far, this is kind of a visual novel. There are a lot of decisions, but I don't think they have a great impact in the different plots. Mostly you can choose if you see or not a scene, and the way this scene is going to develop.

Five stars, not because it's perfect (it's far to be perfect) but because is better than most of the games in this website, and has some different elements, as the diversity in ages, faces and bodies in the 3D models and characters. Also, the dev seems to try to improve and is active in this forum, which is a good thing

If you're a kid or a teenager you will love this game, but if you want something more mature this game will be a disappointment.
The best characters of this game is the cousin and that redhead milf, the others seems like robots that were programmed to do what the mc asks.

My rating to this game:
Story ++
Sex Scenes +++
Graphics ++++

this game is awesome.
it has everything i want from a game.
first of all, amy is best girl. she is milf, she is a redhead. she has freckles. you can have her in front of her hubby (i have a netori thing) , she talks dirty, she is submissive. what else can you expect from an h game girl?
cousin is great, she is sweet and the plot with her can be considered as romantic. she is your cousin so that is a plus for incest lovers(if cousin counts as incest that is).
game has humor elements, so that is nice.
overall, this game is both romantic and kinky (in a way) so i liked it a lot.

if there is anything bad about is game is its animations, but renders are good so lack of animation quality can be tolerated.

a request: i don't know how old is amy, but if mc could impregnate her, that would be epic.

This game shows great promises with some interesting content already.

Not grindy like these time black holes (you know their names).
Well, let's hope it's not going to be abandonned like so many games, so far, so good.

Easy to get through, there is a great hint system built into the game.
No Grind.
Awesome renders. Interesting characters, with many different body types.
Plus Amy and Sophie are just amazing.
Quick updates. Already lots of good content.

the story of the game is average at best. but why 5 stars? two things- most realistic milf i have ever seen and this game has almost no grind at all(which really surprised me considering the format of the game/gameplay). this is a fun game to play and has a decent amout of really hot fap material considering the stage of the game (version 0.24) . if that is what you are looking for then you have come to the right place.

I will state right off I gave it 4 stars simply because it is still an early edition game, and the creator is working a lot on it. I didn't give it 5 only because being so young, there's still a lot to be done.

Now that being said, hands down the overall game is fun. The premise of it is funny, and actually could be plausible. You're a straight male who has had his heart destroyed, so you pretend you're gay to get a job since you really need one. I mean...come on, that's Hollywood script material right there. The characters are also pretty cool. There's 2 I absolutely fell in love with almost immediately. The map is easy to navigate, and the creator has left it open for so many things to be added on. Without a doubt, I'm looking forward to seeing more releases of this game. If it goes as well as I believe it is, I'll be editing my stars sooner or later.

Thanks Domiek for a fun af game to play man.

Very nice game.
The story line is really great in this game. I have played many VN games but didn't find a great story line up like this one.

I personally refer everyone to try this game atleast once and i can guarantee that you will not able to leave the game .

Apart from the story line, the graphics and texts are also great.

I will give it a 9/10 coz if I give 10 it will a too much.. and many can take this as a false review.

Graphics 9.5/10
Writing and Content 10/10
Gameplay 10/10

I am invested in a porn game plot, genuinely .
Its has weird and funny scenes together with sexy stuff.
Just a little criticism; cum looks a bit wonky and im so fucking curious as it where it will go.

Jenna best girl. Amy best Milf.

Another excellent gem I have missed out so long. While the story begins with a casual tone, it quickly develops into some interesting and very unique lines. The graphics accompany the storyline perfectly.
This is one of those games that hold a great promise, its already an awesome entertainment so far.
Thank you

My update Rating of this Game v0.26 is

Pros:
-Nice Renders
-Nice Story
-lots of different scenes
-like the animations
-Action & Thriller
-Long Game Play

Cons:
-None

In my Opinion it is worth a download,
There is also a Staus Screen,that lets you see if you left something out.
I had a lot of fun playing it.
I loved the Read Haired Milf.

Conclusion:
Keep up the Great work..

I couldn't play this game for more than about half an hour before putting it down permanently. The preview renders were decent, and the high review score and frequent updates were good signs, but the game itself isn't very good.

The main issue with this game is the writing. The player character is introduced and is immediately unlikeable. The two paragraphs of backstory are sad (his wife cheated, he drank a lot, then got fired), but don't justify his immense dickishness, particularly when him and his cousin present him as a good dude. Literally the first thing that crosses his mind is that he wants to have sex with as many women as possible and will lie and manipulate to do it.

Now this is the porn game genre, there are characters that do things far worse than lying to get sex, but in the games worth playing, the MC has interesting or redeeming features that make up for it. A character can do bad or dickish things, and still be a likeable character, look at Alicesoft games for instance.

But this guy has no real redeeming qualities. He talks about suicide in the first minute of the game, decides to trick women into sex in the next, then fakes being both a transperson and then gay in the following two while making a quip about identity politics (clearly without any idea what identity politics actually are).

The female characters I met in my short playtime were all monodimensional caricatures. The receptionist's one quality was that she was naive and stupid. The manager of the gym was overly idealistic and manipulable. Then literally an hour after I was hired I click on a fat chick (who the MC is obviously disgusted by) who mentions that I provided services to all the women, and she literally rapes me, just so the author can make a bunch of lazy fat jokes. Then I go into the lobby and the receptionist literally just asks to wank me off in our second conversation right there in the lobby.

I tried to walk around town but the arcade was closed even though it was 9am and it was meant to open at 8. Then I entered a coffee shop where there was an abusive hipster caricature that we mocked, made repeated gay jokes about, and then several trump related jokes as well for no real reason - not even out loud, just in our head.

Basically the game screams self insert fan fiction. The guy believes hes right about everything, spouts his politics, everyone who disagrees is a shit caricature, all the women want him instantly as well as being monodimensional and obviously inferior to the MC.

I didnt give the game one star because the renders are OK, the grammar is acceptable, and the game is largely functional, but this is one of the few games that looked good enough to pick up that I just had to put straight back down.

The renders are much detailled and seen Pretty realistic. Especially a milf named Amy look like a mature Woman. Even her breasts look like those of a women at her age.

The development of the characters is sometimes unexpected. The asian Girl or Amy may here be taken as examples. So it´s not only the main NPC, that´s developing her role.

The mood of the Story is diversified. I really enjoyed the idea how the character got the Job at the ladies gym. The way of helping amy with her Problem at home adds some seriousness to the plot. But not to much.

I think it´s one of the best games here, especially because of the Background of the character, which isn´t Standard like: Father died and now go and fuck the chicks.

TLDR: Scroll to Synopsis.

Story: 9/10 - The overall introduction is unique, which is a major plus to me. No attempt to use the worn out "moving to mom's after <insert tragedy for father here>". In v.23, the 'shock twist' was also a very good and unique touch as well, along with the 'comeback'. The sexual aspects meld in with the storyline, thus far, though some of the sexual aspects might leave a few thinking 'Yeah, right!", but not so outrageous that it would be outside the realm of possibility.
The story so far is a fresh concept that is being nicely executed.

Renders: 9/10 - Excellently done. With the female characters seen so far, a very good variety of body types, races and ages.

Characters: 10/10 - An excellent mix of personalities, rather than the same tired 'cookie cutter slut' types. Ranges from innocent, to a grandmother (not elderly), and a bodybuilder.

User Interface: 9/10 - The interface is not intrusive on the overall display of the renders. Only a couple of occasions where using the H key to hide the interface was needed to see full detail of the model that was being displayed at that moment in time, and only to hide the speech box. Even with the speech box visible at those times, could still see what was displayed fairly well.

Animations: 10/10 - Excellent render and animation work. The animations have a pretty high FPS rate, giving them a smoother, more realistic movement. Couple this with the option of multiple viewpoints for most scenes, increases the overall score in this area substantially. I would give it an 11, but 10 is high enough.

Male Protagonist: 9/10 - The male model is an actual ADULT, with a much more realistic body frame and type, along with far more realistic genital size. No anacondas or sewer pipes between his legs.

Synopsis: 9.5/10 - This is one title that I may contribute to, financially. The Developer has presented a fresh approach and story with enough activity with each of the characters to increase the playing time of the game, even at this early stage. With the 'character hint' screen, the need of a walkthrough to see the available content isn't needed. There are also a couple of directions that one can take with at least one of the characters, as well, giving a bit more in the way of choice and options. I can see the possibility of relationships being possible in future development, based upon the story so far. Definitely one to check out and follow!

Starts off pretty strong but loses steam really quick. If you are looking for a solid storyline and character development this isn't the game you are looking for. There are many unrealistic scenarios (even by nsfw game standard) that really bring down the experience IMO. Only reason I'm giving this one 2/5 is the renders look really good and, most importantly, natural which is something you don't see enough of.

Love this game....
The women are natural looking and hot. The graphics are good and game play is pretty straight forward except when to sleep. That took me a while to figure out lol.

Also the gay angle is interesting as I wonder how the MC will go about convincing girls that he is not gay after a while. Must say so far the only girl that intrigue me is the redhead but mainly the owner of the gym.

Of course he's "roommate" also...

Good game dev.

Graphic is wonderful. Appreciate the variation of model all seems good for me (besides the one having too much freckles).

Points to be improved: game mechanism is too simple and lacking so do the story plot. Hope there will be improvement on both side

I personally enjoy the story a lot. The MC who has hit the rock-bottom, decides to turn a new leaf and find a job he could be good at and even enjoy it, and so he starts working in an all-female gym under the pretense of being gay. Obviously his motives are less than honorable, but that kind of changes as the story goes forward and he gets to know the different ladies and he actually connects with them and starts to genuinely care for them, especially Amy, the lead female character (so far she's been the lead female character).

I really like how each of the character has their own distinctive personality, and the further the story goes, the more we actually get to know the characters, we get to know why they are how they are, which of course helps me decide if I like them or not as a person; in example now this latest update helped me understand the bodybuilder chick, at first she came off obnoxious and a bully, but now that I know her better I actually like her and want to help her with her issues and hopefully she and MC will get in better terms, become friends or maybe...something more, hmm?
Obviously my favorite ladies are Amy and the Cousin (I'm bad at remembering names, takes me time to memorize them), but now I actually like the bodybuilder chick too.

What I absolutely appreciate too, is the fact that the models look rather natural, Amy especially, looking like her supposed age rather than the usual "I'm 45 years old, a mother of three, but I look younger and hotter than my 25 year-old daughter", Amy is definitely still rocking it, she's a true MILF, haha.

This is absolutely one of the VNs I'm absolutely anticipating updates for, because the story is great and I really want to get to know and get closer to Amy and the Cousin, and now the bodybuilder too, why not the Asian swimmer and even the business owner too, there's potential with each of them, can't wait to see where things go.

Keep up the very good job @Domiek!