I don't understand how so many games can have such a high score on this site while being mediocre or poor in quality. I would mention another game like that but I got in trouble before so I can't cause it's against the rules (even though I really want to). This game looks very good based on the screenshots. This is why I gave it a 2 instead of a 1 because the model quality is high, but guys, high-def models aren't everything.
The first red flag in this game is that the protagonist doesn't have a single line of dialogue with someone until he meets a random side character. Multiple characters will talk to him, but he'll have an inner dialogue with himself in response. I actually thought the MC was mute. The next red flag is that this guy gets caught taking photos in a girl's locker room, and basically gets a slap on the wrist which his sister (I think it was his sister) points out but nothing comes of it. Writers remember, just because you point out something dumb about your writing in your story, doesn't make it smart.
Then a "ruffian" comes to his house to extort him for money, and he's nonchalantly sitting on the steps. Maybe most of you guys have never been in that sort of situation irl, but even the toughest man will be on edge if a criminal broke into his house and extorted him. The MC was calm because the author knew he wouldn't be harmed in that scene, which bled into the MC's behavior, which is another writing flaw.
Maybe if you skip the dialogue and focus on the action, it would be good. But to those that care about the story above all, there are better ones out there.
The first red flag in this game is that the protagonist doesn't have a single line of dialogue with someone until he meets a random side character. Multiple characters will talk to him, but he'll have an inner dialogue with himself in response. I actually thought the MC was mute. The next red flag is that this guy gets caught taking photos in a girl's locker room, and basically gets a slap on the wrist which his sister (I think it was his sister) points out but nothing comes of it. Writers remember, just because you point out something dumb about your writing in your story, doesn't make it smart.
Then a "ruffian" comes to his house to extort him for money, and he's nonchalantly sitting on the steps. Maybe most of you guys have never been in that sort of situation irl, but even the toughest man will be on edge if a criminal broke into his house and extorted him. The MC was calm because the author knew he wouldn't be harmed in that scene, which bled into the MC's behavior, which is another writing flaw.
Maybe if you skip the dialogue and focus on the action, it would be good. But to those that care about the story above all, there are better ones out there.