Hi everyone
I usually play Pizza hot free to play, but this time I was able to play the current version because a friend who is on vacation lent me his laptop.
I am very happy with the content of this update. Since Mr. Humper only changes every Monday, you have to come past day 100 to see everything. Of course the game still has its weaknesses and too little content for this long. But you can see where Abelius wants to go and I'm looking forward to Mr Humper's story line continuing.
I have a few things here that I hope will make it into the game at some point:
I like the Mr Humper story, but it still needs to be merged with the lewdness and exhibition system for it to make sense.
The other Mr Humper events would need to be expanded and aligned with Jenny's reactions during the Mr Humper massages. The clothes at home also have to make sense, since both Mr. Humper and Kayla already have the opportunity to see Jenny naked.
It would also be nice if the refrigerator event could be repeated while cleaning the kitchen, even with maid clothes and without underwear.
I don't like the bus event as it is now. It should take Jenny a lot longer before she's ready to let someone touch her or even jerk someone off. At the beginning, the molester should only dare to caress Jenny's arms, legs and stomach and when she reaches a certain level of lewdness he really takes hold. Only then should events come that are a little more intimate.
Since you take the bus every day, the events should also feel more random. Wouldn't mind sometimes encountering a molester whose lewdness requirements are too high and therefore I only manage part of the event.
The pizzeria mini-game, on which the game is based, is basically quite nice. But here too there is a bit of a lack of random events and difficulty levels with more guests and full tables.
The mechanics for conversations with guests are generally a good idea, but the speech bubbles should have a much longer time to be clicked on. Not possible with the touchpad.
The slap on the butt from the boss when you fall asleep drunk while working is very fitting. But I would move these events to a bad shift. This would still leave room for Drug Assault when Jenny is lying drunk on the sofa. At first the boss could just jerk off and after a few events undress Jenny and use her hand and mouth. Events would also be possible here depending on clothing. Sleep Assault would be a better fit for Mr. Humper, but he already has Jenny under control and no longer needs to touch her in her sleep.
The massage salon is a nice event, but a lot of potential is lost here too.
There are 5 outfits to choose from and only 3 allow you to decide which side you want to lie on. This should be possible with all outfits and there should also be a new choice as to whether the upper or lower body is massaged. Just as with the underwear and the bikini, the masseur could also go too far with his own outfit, reach under the clothing and suddenly undress Jenny.
The last topic concerns the character style. I like how many of the characters look. What I don't like is that all the people are the same size and apart from Mr Humper, the masseur, the boss and Bernard, they are all the same age. It makes sense on the way home on the bus, but I don't understand why random women don't go to the pizzeria to eat.
Also, it would be great if there were more adjustments for Jenny at the beginning of the game, like height.
Much larger breasts or smaller ones like Kalya's or even flatter ones would also be nice with this selection. Personally, my butt and thighs are a bit too wide, so a selection would be good here too.
I don't think it would do the game much good to include sex at this point. You only see everything from the side anyway and there are already enough bad games with sex. The Mr Humper story is about to get a blowjob, this will have to do for us for now. What is more important is the expansion of existing events and the development of new event locations.
I hope that Abelius sees this as constructive criticism and implements some of it.
Best regards,
Ruede
PS: Sorry for the google translator english^^