I wish there was better writing in this game. The scenarios are good but the writing always just ends up falling flat at times since it's in english but obviously isn't written by a native english speaker. Like it's not terrible or unintelligible but the sour notes it hits ruins some of the dialogue/monologue.
Also, I hope future side stories have better characters driving them. Like Yoshida is a borderline racist caricature and makes every scene he's involved in less erotic. All of his dialogue is so far off the deep end that I'm surprised he wasn't just named "Ching Chong Bing Bong" instead. At least his character art is passable so a simple revision in the writing would fix most of it.
I just think a big part of good corruption games is making the girl want what is going to happen and that usually happens when the guy is attractive, or at worst, non-descript but seductive or good with his hands. I mean even when some games or porn goes off the rails with some really ugly or fat bastard they at least give him a big dick so the girl has something to corrupt her into wanting it. Even with the masseuse aspect of it, there's not much anticipation when the dialogue is gonna end up being: "Hord stirr whire I rube you up" and he whips out his micropenis because the dev really wanted to ride the stereotype into the ground.
It sucks when you end up spending a lot of time with characters that are so poorly written.