Everything feels extremely lazy.
Yes it is a simple premise, so I did not expect him to reinvent the wheel, but the dialog is really poor, there are like 20 different renders and it is very uninspired. There is also no reason for this to be RPGM.
Take more time to develop their relationship, do more intermediate scenes of him trying to push the boundaries and make his actions have some real consequences. I think this would help making it feel less like a pronshoot.
Yes it is a simple premise, so I did not expect him to reinvent the wheel, but the dialog is really poor, there are like 20 different renders and it is very uninspired. There is also no reason for this to be RPGM.
Take more time to develop their relationship, do more intermediate scenes of him trying to push the boundaries and make his actions have some real consequences. I think this would help making it feel less like a pronshoot.