Pool - Please choose better art.
- Thread starter Angel1984
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- Apr 14, 2021
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Bruh, this should be: 'Please choose better face.'
And i would still say: 'They both suck.'
And i would still say: 'They both suck.'
- Jul 25, 2020
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yeah basicly.. i should be choose a better faceBruh, this should be: 'Please choose better face.'
And i would still say: 'They both suck.'
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- Sep 13, 2016
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Well my opinion,
part - prefer gray or white - reason
background - gray - because of better contrast between character vs background.
eyebrows - none - both need to be thinner and more uniform.
nose - none - both need a retouch.
ears - none - both need to be smaller. i wouldn't mind if the ears would be completely hidden with that hairstyle.
face - white - grey square jawline is making the character look a bit to male.
lips - gray - mainly because white upper lip looks a bit to thin to me.
neck - gray - though both are kinda tall and the trapezius muscle is to flat; the neck straitening in white needs to be more uniform not just a weird bend though i prefer this approach it needs a better implementation and why i end up voting gray in this category.
shadows - white - mainly because at least in that one the left half of the face doesn't have shadow, i would also try a lighter tone for that shadow and perhaps a different color, to me as it is looks bad.
Considering the rest of the body is pretty much equal in both i will refrain from sharing my opinion on those parts.
On another aspect if the goal is the character cosplaying as X-men Storm it's fine though if it's Storm you could get rid of the eyes iris.
part - prefer gray or white - reason
background - gray - because of better contrast between character vs background.
eyebrows - none - both need to be thinner and more uniform.
nose - none - both need a retouch.
ears - none - both need to be smaller. i wouldn't mind if the ears would be completely hidden with that hairstyle.
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lips - gray - mainly because white upper lip looks a bit to thin to me.
neck - gray - though both are kinda tall and the trapezius muscle is to flat; the neck straitening in white needs to be more uniform not just a weird bend though i prefer this approach it needs a better implementation and why i end up voting gray in this category.
shadows - white - mainly because at least in that one the left half of the face doesn't have shadow, i would also try a lighter tone for that shadow and perhaps a different color, to me as it is looks bad.
Considering the rest of the body is pretty much equal in both i will refrain from sharing my opinion on those parts.
On another aspect if the goal is the character cosplaying as X-men Storm it's fine though if it's Storm you could get rid of the eyes iris.
- Jul 25, 2020
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I seriously can't tell the difference. They both look fine, except for the faces, which are gross in both (sorry), as reflected by other comments above. I'd pay less attention to minimal differences and work on improving the face of the model. The only extremely unappealing part in an otherwise good drawing. As the faces look equally bad in both, it's not worth comparing the faces of the two.
- Sep 20, 2020
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Right one - the one with white background. The face shape is more feminine than the one with the grey background
- Jul 25, 2020
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oh there is absolutly no need to be sorry.. after looking at something for 20 hrs straight theese things kinda get lost in the process
.. and ultimately this will lead to a better art.. Thanks !Thanks for accepting criticism gracefully. IMO, it's the way you're texturizing/shading the faces that make them look unappealing, along with where you decided to shade instead of outline. Plus there might be some unevenness/asymmetry in the faces in general, or weird facial structure. The bodies are well drawn and appealing (though the left arm could use a line up to the pit), so I'm sure you all have the skill to draw a more appealing face if you rework your style & note realistic facial structures.oh there is absolutly no need to be sorry.. after looking at something for 20 hrs straight theese things kinda get lost in the process
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