VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Presumption of Guilt [v0.1a] [MistGames]

Very nice renders, but the story is very cliche. Father died MC returns home, mother an alcoholic which inevitably will lead to them doing things together whilst she is "drunk" No choices, just kinetic. Waitress having a play behind the counter in coffee shop pulled me out of the monent.... becuase that always happens in the real world! next episode i expect to see some yoga, and some clothes shopping with a little bit of peeping in the changing room with some modling of the clothes. The renders are nice though.

The renders look good so far, but that script so far needs some real work... I realize this is a 0.1 release, but it's like someone threw a bunch of adult game cliches into a plot without checking to see if it was coherent. On the plus side, the MClooks respectable enough and his sister / mom are both good looking without being obvious cookie cutters as well.