VN - Ren'Py - Price of Desires [Ep.2] [DogWalker]

Interesting concept good renders, a bit bare bones but have a lot of potential.

Will love if the gameand characters are not so limited , by their interaction to side characters , because the writer clearly showed their potential in writing hot interaction.

My only issue is that for now the male mc is deadbeat which undermines any semblance of relationship they have

A very solid start to the game, specially story-wise. Obviously the premise has faults, but you accept the premise of the game if you download this, so I'm not counting that. But the characters, their thoughts and behaviors do feel believable and actually they do care for eachother and it is a solid path to keep them together and happy while also the temptations outside are rather well done and interesting as little steps. But so far, as of Ep 2, that's all there is, little steps, much more of character building and so on than great acts of corruption or so on. Choices do seem to matter with the usual points system, we'll see futher down how much they actually do.

Render quality is nice but not great though, but character models are pretty good and original. Animations are a bit on the shorter side but are nice enough as well, even if there isn't too much "action" so far. I turned off the music and found no sound so that's a point a bit downward. And I did get a problem since the gallery (included, like a walkthrough with the point gain/loss on each choice) didn't unlock any of the scenes I saw. And I did not see any scene if the MC is the one getting the massage instead of the FMC, which was pretty strange.

So, all in all, not a perfect beginning but a solid start.

The game starts with an great husband and wife. Right from the beginning, we see they aren’t one-dimensional characters. Both have their own principles and values, love each other deeply, care a lot for one another, but have some sexual issues, which is fine—it’s needed. You can resolve this in the vanilla or NTS path
The FMC is incredibly hot. It’s not for nothing that every guy in the game is crazy about her, and she has a good personality with one flaw I’ll mention at the end of this review
The MC isn’t a loser either. We can enjoy his POV, which is great. You don’t need a loser MC to fully enjoy the game
Dialogue: This is one of the game’s strongest points. The writing is excellent. I enjoyed dialogue—no long, unnecessary ones, no simplistic, illogical, clichéd, or childish lines
Story: We’re dealing with a mature story, not a simplistic, one-dimensional one driven solely by lust. I’m tired of most NTS games these days that are just about a horny MC and FMC
Animation engine: It’s Blender, so expect top-notch animations
Logic, character diversity, and other aspects have been well thought out as well

Problem:
FMC’s thoughts during sex scenes: They don’t give the player room to breathe or reflect. Her thoughts shouldn’t be entirely lustful. She’s supposed to be the heart of this game—the more value she has, the more valuable the game is. In her inner monologues when another man touches her, mix lustful thoughts with reasoning so players don’t see her as just a slut

Suggestion:
I hope there’s a physical NTR path where the FMC loves the MC, but sexual events happen behind his back. Personally, I don’t like emotional NTR—where the FMC falls for someone else and drifts away from the MC
That said, in this game, I’m primarily a fan of wife sharing, then physical NTR

Good start. Love the renders and the animations. I like where the direction is going. The FMC is hot and flirty. But, the male MC model is quite generic (he looks like an npc, tbh). I hope the this game will be regularly updated.

Really great start to a female corruption game.

Looking forward to more updates to see where the story goes, but so far the renders are of excellent quality and there are some enticing scenes to get the ball rolling.

There is also a good amount of decisions to be made that allow and will continue to allow the story to branch along different paths.

Though the visuals are incredible, and the concept and story are pretty interesting, this game needs a lot of work. But it isn't bad.
Good:
- The character models are gorgeous, and the main female lead is a freaking bombshell of a model.
- The story is interesting, though moving at a pretty slow pace.
- The 1 sex scene (bj in the hotel room) was ok, but I just wish there were more options.
The bad:
- The dialog does need some work, but I think with a little TLC, it could be amazing. Also, there are times where, I guess Clair is her name, refers to Derek as "MC 1". May want to fix that in the script.
-The filter over all the images is distracting. There are some great character models; no need to muddle them with a filter.
- The static character models over images of a background is very 2018 AVN. like I said, you have some awesome character models, invest in some better backgrounds, and don't turn them into still images during long dialog portions.
Anyway, I like where this game is heading, but I hope to see a bit of TLC put into the first chapter before you move on. Keep up the good work.