Reviewing v.1.0 Beta(Tagged: Completed)
The Good
— The general art, the animation and the whole graphic. I even don't mind MC's design, it has a "underdog-vibe"
The Annoying
— The idea that this VN is a sandbox...which it isn't...it's an interactive kinetic novel. The interaction is that you can move around...and that's it, which is a thing that inexperienced developer do so to put the "sandbox" tag. Little secret here: People don't care if you're making a kinetic novel or a sandbox, as long as it makes sense, and it's good. This game doesn't have choices, so it's a kinetic novel, the plot is forced on you, the characters are forced on you, either you like it or not.
The Bad
— We talked about how this game is a kinetic novel, whether you like it or not...Well, it's time to talk about the plot: non-existent. Only some drama where we are forced to deal with an overbearing mother, a sociopathic friend, a nympho aunt, and a home-wrecking mother of said sociopathic friend, a bitchy sister and a shy cousin. Let's talk about it though: Catherine is a widow with a good-for-nothing husband that cheated on her with that home-wrecker, and died leaving the family to deal with debts, so Catherine decides to use herself as a guinea pig to test an unknown drug (that i believe is some sort of super-hormone, it's unsaid what it is, and only its effects are known) only to be "enslaved" by the effects of this drug, that induce lactations, horniness and enhanced fertility in women and in men, they become hornier, they reek of testosterone, improves the quality, and taste of sperm and it enlarges their penis. MC curious starts to take this drug and suddenly becomes a pussy-magnet, becoming victim of his mother obsession and victim of said sociopathic friend also known as Heather, not mentioning how Naomi(Heather's mom) starts to seduce MC despite the fact that she seduced MC's dad for the very same reason: Having another child(why specifically wanting someone from MC's lineage...when she could have artificial insemination or find a date willing to give her what she wants, is beyond me considering that MC's family is in debts, to the point that Catherine is so desperate that she is willing to be her own guinea pig for a shady untested drug). Everything would end the moment Catherine tells MC that Naomi is the woman that her husband(and father of MC) cheated with...i mean i wouldn't even stay in the same town with a person who ruined a big part of my family, but MC is an idiot and got Naomi pregnant and breaks both his arms. From this point if the plot seemed bad and poor, it becomes so much worse, because MC becomes the "reward", the "person of the dreams" of everyone but Heather(who is scheming to use MC to get her girlfriend aka MC's sister, pregnant for some sort of revenge because MC got Heather pregnant...SOMEHOW, maybe is something in a flashback that we'll see in the future updates, but Heather barely touches MC in the present), including MC's aunt, and MC's cousin(Fiona, the only decent character of this game, and ironically also the least present). And that's it, we have people literally arguing over having MC all for themselves, while being accused and accusing each other about how they're incestuous sluts for even thinking of having sex with MC. MC in all of this...he fucks everyone while enjoying drinking breast-milk from his mother, and doing other pleasant sexy-thing while manipulated like a puppet(because his arms are blocked by the casts).
- Between updates, the save-files are incompatible, and the start of the game asks you "from which version you want to start?" but if (like me) you forget at what point you were in the game...it's going to be messy.
- The Ending is the most stupid, offensive(because its stupidity), brushed-off and dismissed thing i've ever seen, MC fucks the scientist-woman in the ass, timeskip six months a few kids are born then timeskip two months later, the scientist-woman i mentioned before is in jail for her research(MC's mom erased her name from al documents, and she does it because the scientist-woman TOLD HER TO DO SO) and she also reveals to be pregnant because MC fucked during visits...which the dev could had the decency to show such visits...because from the player's point-of-view this woman is pregnant after some anal-sex...MC really didn't notice her belly getting bigger? REALLY!?
Conclusion
This game is bad, the one star is for the graphic, which can't save this game, despite how good it is. The game is one of the worst i've ever played, it's buggy, it's not really entertaining, and it's dismissed by the developer himself very fast, he did promise a "DLC" that should show random moments of MC's life during those timeskips...but i refuse to waste my time with this pile of garbage.
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The Good
— The general art, the animation and the whole graphic. I even don't mind MC's design, it has a "underdog-vibe"
The Annoying
— The idea that this VN is a sandbox...which it isn't...it's an interactive kinetic novel. The interaction is that you can move around...and that's it, which is a thing that inexperienced developer do so to put the "sandbox" tag. Little secret here: People don't care if you're making a kinetic novel or a sandbox, as long as it makes sense, and it's good. This game doesn't have choices, so it's a kinetic novel, the plot is forced on you, the characters are forced on you, either you like it or not.
The Bad
— We talked about how this game is a kinetic novel, whether you like it or not...Well, it's time to talk about the plot: non-existent. Only some drama where we are forced to deal with an overbearing mother, a sociopathic friend, a nympho aunt, and a home-wrecking mother of said sociopathic friend, a bitchy sister and a shy cousin. Let's talk about it though: Catherine is a widow with a good-for-nothing husband that cheated on her with that home-wrecker, and died leaving the family to deal with debts, so Catherine decides to use herself as a guinea pig to test an unknown drug (that i believe is some sort of super-hormone, it's unsaid what it is, and only its effects are known) only to be "enslaved" by the effects of this drug, that induce lactations, horniness and enhanced fertility in women and in men, they become hornier, they reek of testosterone, improves the quality, and taste of sperm and it enlarges their penis. MC curious starts to take this drug and suddenly becomes a pussy-magnet, becoming victim of his mother obsession and victim of said sociopathic friend also known as Heather, not mentioning how Naomi(Heather's mom) starts to seduce MC despite the fact that she seduced MC's dad for the very same reason: Having another child(why specifically wanting someone from MC's lineage...when she could have artificial insemination or find a date willing to give her what she wants, is beyond me considering that MC's family is in debts, to the point that Catherine is so desperate that she is willing to be her own guinea pig for a shady untested drug). Everything would end the moment Catherine tells MC that Naomi is the woman that her husband(and father of MC) cheated with...i mean i wouldn't even stay in the same town with a person who ruined a big part of my family, but MC is an idiot and got Naomi pregnant and breaks both his arms. From this point if the plot seemed bad and poor, it becomes so much worse, because MC becomes the "reward", the "person of the dreams" of everyone but Heather(who is scheming to use MC to get her girlfriend aka MC's sister, pregnant for some sort of revenge because MC got Heather pregnant...SOMEHOW, maybe is something in a flashback that we'll see in the future updates, but Heather barely touches MC in the present), including MC's aunt, and MC's cousin(Fiona, the only decent character of this game, and ironically also the least present). And that's it, we have people literally arguing over having MC all for themselves, while being accused and accusing each other about how they're incestuous sluts for even thinking of having sex with MC. MC in all of this...he fucks everyone while enjoying drinking breast-milk from his mother, and doing other pleasant sexy-thing while manipulated like a puppet(because his arms are blocked by the casts).
- Between updates, the save-files are incompatible, and the start of the game asks you "from which version you want to start?" but if (like me) you forget at what point you were in the game...it's going to be messy.
- The Ending is the most stupid, offensive(because its stupidity), brushed-off and dismissed thing i've ever seen, MC fucks the scientist-woman in the ass, timeskip six months a few kids are born then timeskip two months later, the scientist-woman i mentioned before is in jail for her research(MC's mom erased her name from al documents, and she does it because the scientist-woman TOLD HER TO DO SO) and she also reveals to be pregnant because MC fucked during visits...which the dev could had the decency to show such visits...because from the player's point-of-view this woman is pregnant after some anal-sex...MC really didn't notice her belly getting bigger? REALLY!?
Conclusion
This game is bad, the one star is for the graphic, which can't save this game, despite how good it is. The game is one of the worst i've ever played, it's buggy, it's not really entertaining, and it's dismissed by the developer himself very fast, he did promise a "DLC" that should show random moments of MC's life during those timeskips...but i refuse to waste my time with this pile of garbage.