VN - Ren'Py - Project Myriam - Life and Explorations [Ch. 5.08a+p] [Zorlun]

So, for a first-time project, you seem to have piqued a lot of genuine interest in it. It seems there is something here for everyone. I hope it does well for you.
In my case, it just moved up to #1 on my list of favorites. So much so that, shortly, I'll be adding my name to your SubscribeStar faithful.
Here's hoping your imagination stays active and creative. 5 Stars.

[v3.03]Surprisingly enjoyable with lots of branching options that allows for several replays despite its (still) short story. The art gets the job done (solid and good-looking without being absolutely top tier). Hopefully the array of kinks explored will be expanded and developed further in future releases.

First, it's an excellent game really for an erotic VN. And this is DEFINITELY a porn game that in no way hides that fact. So don't expect a some deep and truly believable story. However, it certainly flows well enough not to be TOO unrealistic....even with the crazy amount of kinks the dev has worked into it.
Second, most of the models are rather pleasant to the eye. In fact, the only one that I found to be most displeasing was the main protagonist, which is why I had to take away one star. She's just TOO over the top in proportions. Kind of sad given nearly every other woman is rather well sculpted. To each their own and there are certainly VNs on here that are far worse but it just ruined the overall crafting of it for me personally.

Lastly, technical. Everything seems to run fine for me. UI is pretty standard. I think it's a little heavy on the traits and kinks counting and, without doing a second playthrough, I can't really say just how much effect it all actually has. Grammar could certainly use a proofreader but overall not bad given it's not the dev's first language. I mean, over all I never had a moment where, even at it's worst, I had any difficulty understanding it.

So definitely a solid 4 star for me.

Great game. Interesting story. Nice renders. Models are great too. No overexcessive dialogues. Enjoy the stats based choice system. Replayed multiple times already. Wish this game had more recognition and patreons, so we can get bigger updates in the same time period.(i live the monthly updates)

Overall 9/10.

This is an interesting VN in concept but badly executed. Everything happens so quickly that nothing feels rewarding. The renders are alright, but Myriam isn't really very appealing to look at. This game might appeal to fans of A Wife and Mother that hate the slow-burn of that game since the plot feels very similar. Although without the slow burn nothing about the events feels very exciting to watch since Myriam goes all out if you decide to follow a path of events without any sort of gradual escalation. I guess this has its fans, but it is just not for me.

A game that promises a lot. A game that promises much. Good luck to the author and overcoming obstacles on his thorny path, yes. The graphics are peculiar, but you get used to it. Thanks for the good project

I had my doubts about this one, but its coming along surprisingly well.

The renders aren't the best. I like that the MC actually looks like an older woman, but I don't like the... measurements? She's a little too out there size wise (boobs and butt in particular) for my tastes.

For all the different scenarios that come along, the writing is surprisingly solid. Not going to win any awards, but it makes the situations at least semi-credible, which is all it needs to do, really.

I also like that Myriam is not an insta-slut. She can (and does) do some pretty crazy things, but she still has doubts and concerns about things. It feels much more believable that she's just getting swept away by lust (or other emotions) a lot of the time.

Aside from the renders being serviceable but not great (other games have raised the bar for renders, and this one just doesn't meet them) I have a couple smaller complaints. Mostly taste related.

I wish Anthony was a bit better written and a bit more appealing. The domineering husband can be an amusing kink, but here it strains credulity. Given her other options, I find it hard to justify Myriam sticking around as long as she does with how outright abusive and ugly Anthony is. A more attractive and manipulative character would have been more interesting, imo.

Some of the scenarios feel a little disjointed as well. I suspect because the author is just trying to jam as many kinks in as they can. The homeless guy, for one, seems superfluous.

Beyond that, however, its a very solid game and development is progressing surprisingly quickly, so its definitely one of the better offerings right now.

Great!Just what I was looking for. A great varied plot without any unnecessary details or overload. I wish I had seen the project earlier.great debut for a developer, looking forward to the next versions and good luck

Really a very good game with a lot of choices and variants depending on the path you want to take, everything is there in terms of content and the vices are quite researched.

The MC can have a very twisted mind or be a saint or even worse....

The graphics are good, the facial expressions are well respected.

I am a fan so I started the translation of the game into French because there is a lot of demand for this game in my native language.

Thanks again and don't give up.
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Vraiment un très bon jeu avec beaucoup de choix et de variantes selon le chemin que l'on veux prendre, tout y est en terme de contenu et les vices sont assez recherché.
Le MC peut avoir l'esprit bien tordu ou être une sainte ou pire encore....

Les graphisme sont bien, les expression du visages sont bien respectées.

Je suis fan donc j'ai commencé la traduction du jeu en Français car il y a beaucoup de demande pour ce jeu dans ma langue natale.

encore merci et ne lâche rien.

This game is undoubtedly one of the best games with a female protagonist. I love the way the decision making is marking Myriam's perversions, allowing you to choose different kinks that suit all tastes. Looking forward to new content.

Went into this game not expecting it to be as good as it is! The story is really kinky and dirty in a good way. I like the situations the MC gets herself in and the choices you have for her. The action gets right to it fast and not in a totally rushed way. When I reached the end of the current build I was left wanting more! Looking for this to continue and hopefully be a finished game.

Ch3.02a+p

A corruption VM about a MILF named Miriam who wanders from one sexual situation to the next going, "Oh my God I can't believe this is happening" before being jizzed on. It's a decent little visual novel so far with some okay writing and a lot of novel situations. I think the choice system where Myriam gets more corrupted in different ways based on what you choose is interesting. The renders are pretty good but the models are a bit weird and uncanny for me, and Myriam has one overutilized surprised facial expression . Overall, not a bad start and I'll be interested to see where it's headed.

The amount of choices is realy cool. scenes are good, no animations but didnt matter since the rest was close to perfect for me.
The characters are pretty good, their names are funny so it can slightly set you off when you read them. playing a mother is refreshing and the writing is quite good, i didn't notice many english mistakes ( i know i saw a big one in the beginning but i can't recall what)

This is the first review i make. I am new to the porn games world but played now about 10 games. This is the first game i finished. What a great game it was. A lot of fetish , i love extreme porn so the kinks in here are so good : Anal, Atm,DP,DAP,Pee,even bestiality . That is what i like to see in games. The corruption is really good , you can turn the MC in a real slut or not. The animations are good and the writing is good. I did not care if the english was bad anyway it is not my first language too. The graphics are not the best but very good. The MC look real good.
I have to say thanks because for a first game i finished it is a great start.

V. Ch3 0.02a(patched) Reviewed

This is 100% one of my guilty pleasure games. I subconsciously divide Ren'Py games into those I play for enjoyment, and those I play for a good fap, and this somehow bridges the gap between the two, with a bias toward the latter.

There are a bewildering number of stats to track in this title, and I'm not sure how many of them are actually leveraged in how the game branches, as many of the actual available paths appear to be determined more by prior choices than the actual kink score. That said, there is definitely content that is gated by points, but it's not really clear what threshold the player needs to achieve to unlock them.

This is a minor complaint really. For pure sexual deviance, the dev has let his freak flag fly in the most glorious of ways, and Myriam can be as fucked up twisted as you want her to be, up to and including fucking her dog, horse, half her students, her family, and anyone else she stumbles across in her day-to-day.

There is no slow burn here. Literally from the first episode, Myriam finds herself glazed like a donut from a mentally disabled stranger in her shower stall at a hotel while her husband relaxes oblivious in their room.

And therein really lies the rub. Myriam has already explored so many kinks that there's really nowhere left to go from here. She's been raped, gangbanged, humiliated, beaten, dommed and subbed by damn near everyone in her circle now, so my worry is that Project Myriam will run into the same brick wall The Adventurous Couple did: Once a certain line is crossed, it'll become increasingly difficult to make sufficiently escalating or shocking content with the protagonist that doesn't feel like it's been done before.

The above is the ONLY thing keeping this title from getting the fifth star from me, and I'll happily (fappily?) revise it to five star level if Zorlun proves me wrong. And I'm almost betting he will!

As far as fap games go, this one covers so many kinks most players will find something to break out their box of tissues for. Further, the dev is exceedingly regular with his updates and I can see his skills improving as he gets more confident in the medium.

The art started out a bit rough, but has improved with time as we see in many first projects. Myriam's recently-updated hairstyle makes her far more attractive than she was for the bulk of the game.

The writing is competent enough, but nothing fantastic, and it doesn't really have to be given the sheer porn scene density here. While there are no true animations, and lots of alternating two-scene sex acts, they are universally erotic and messy which appeals to my particular tastes.

I have been his patron for a long time now, and I don't see that changing.

It was slow at CH1 , but it's getting better now .
It shows that the developer is making progress , this is very great .
The art modeling is amazing and the story is amazing too .
The potential is huge and worth collecting .

Great game. With a fascinating plot, amazing branching, good graphics.
Zorlun have a great imagination.)
The story itself is interesting.
I see the success of not only this project, but also the future of this dev.
Good luck

Quite an entertaining game! Love Myriam <3 I hope the author makes this game more fleshed out and takes Myriam in new directions and situations, etc.. I sometimes find this game hilarious.. Some humor would be nice as well.

I like this game a lot, I especially love the paranormal/supernatural elements. I also like the character development / interactions, and how they affect the direction of the story. Looking forward to the next update.

I love this game and really hope to see the utilization of the different fetishes a bit more in the future (Let her take those dog and horse D's and submit to Nubia)
Also, really looking forward to see more action with Evelyn, maybe letting her and Myriam get into a orgy together or something in that direction <3

Whatever will be added in the future, I will make sure to check it out.