VN - Ren'Py - Project: S.P.E.S. [v0.10] [6Rairyu9]

I will start by saying I understand this is a first game, and it's better than I can do, so I respect the attempt, the work put in, and the stones needed to share it in a public setting. However...

The women in this are written very poorly. Through the dialogue, 95% of them seem bitchy, rude, self-centered, narcissistic, arrogant, selfish, nasty, hypocritical, manipulative, and abusive. I wouldn't even want to talk to most of them, much less sleep with them. The Mc isn't much better, his character is yet another doormat. Why doesn't he question the "doctor" about needing a sperm sample for testing for diseases? Why not straight up refuse it? Does he have zero basic medical knowledge? Why does he not have a backbone and strip in a room full of bitchy women he doesn't even know, just because he's told to? There's a truly massive difference between being a good person that's kind and helpful, and being a doormat with no spine or boundaries. There's many, many other examples in the story of him being this way, just chose those instances because they were particularly annoying and infuriating.

Beyond that, I understand English is not the first language here, but get a proofreader. If you have one already, get a new one. There's a boatload of problems with spelling, sayings, phrasing, etc. Don't try and use phrases or sayings you don't properly understand. I also encountered multiple spots where the dialogue says "Mc" instead of the character's name.

v0.9
I would prefer to have given it 4.5 stars.
My only real complaints are: meh translation, especially during the h-scenes ("Slam me"), The h-scenes are inconsistent with the animation as some angles/positions are more fluid than others and the scenes themselves I feel are too short. I am not a fan of how the mc reacted during the scene where he had to go back home. All in all I think these complaints are nitpicky at best, which is why i only took half a star for them.

The story however is really interesting and has me hooked. Excited to see how the story continues!

i would have given it 5 stars coz i really liked it when the story lead it to the college/uni/school, but as soon as sofia came back and her attitude made me drop it 3 stars she made me press the skip button so much i have no idea what has happened in the story since the parents visit if she wasnt so unlikable i would have given this 5 stars if you ever have the option to remove her from the harem let me know and il be back to continue playing this

I've really been enjoying this game over the updates. I always like a story in which the protagonist has abilities unknown to him and his friends, then is drawn into an unfamiliar setting by people looking to either use his abilities for their own purposes or to support him in finding his true destiny. Until now, it's been unclear which of these situations our MC finds himself in.
I also like the development of the tsundere character as a more three-dimensional person than just the spoiled rich girl who never learns better. It will be interesting to see how the situation evolves into a full-blown harem, particularly after his childhood friend (and first LI) moves from the zone he lived in originally to live with him in the privileged zone he has been moved to.
The character development has been subtle and progressive, in the case of the maid who was provided to him, and is more loyal and attached to him than she might be simply out of duty.
In short, I'll continue to follow this as long as it continues to move forward with and intriguing group of characters living through a complex evolving story.
I'm afraid I can't really pass judgment on the graphics, since I pay far less attention to them than to the storytelling and character development.

Started following the game at the first moment and liked it immediately. Interesting to follow the story and characters. Maybe 5* is a lot at the moment, but the reviews that people leave are not deserved. I recommend trying the game and not listening to what people write about Sophia.

Well, I tried with all my might to read this VN, but with the 0.9, I alt+F4.
I hate tsundere to the core, when it's light it's passable, but here we don't have one tsundere, but two!
When they were separated it was my mental limit, but now in the same house I want to be done with them!
Not only does this create useless dialogues, but we end up with a miserable mc who does everything to please them.
At this point I'd call it masochism and unnecessary pain for the brain!
It's bad enough that we're not making any headway in terms of the plot, but the problems the mc encounters are also giving us a headache, in short, the balance is broken, I'm no longer enjoying myself, I've deleted the game!
I vote to rename the game “The Familiar of Emila and Sofia”.

It's a shame, I liked the basic story, it was interesting, I was curious about the story of several characters, but unfortunately spoiled by two tsundere!

Really liked the backdrop of a dystopian class based society where rich families rule absolute and a guy (MC) from a lower class district surprisingly gets the chance to attend an elite school. The mysterious circumstances of how and why are slowly revealed as the story progresses. Interesting & varied cast of characters & LIs that have plenty of personality in addition to their sex appeal, and some great sex scenes. Not much in terms of branching choices, basically whether you pursue some relationships or not. But honestly i don't find that problematic for this type of game.

Giving it 5 stars might be a bit much right now, wish there was a wider spectrum of stars: imo it's more of a ****-game with some upward potential right now.
But i'm glad i didn't listen to the rather unfair 1-2 star reviews & would definitely recommend it.

Ok It is probably a 3* right now, but I want to compensate a little the really low reviews that didn't give it a fair chance.

For me the story is interesting enough, and it shows a lot of thought by the developer. In fact, the story and the beautiful girls and nice wholesome moments are the things making me stick to the game.

However, the erotic scenes are a bit disappointing. The animations are nice but in general are a bit boring, and they could use with some more description of what’s going on or dialogue, and some kind of leading to it. Right now they are just there, like an addition just to make the game and Adult VN. With a little more though put into them this game could be a great one.

Also there are some grammatical mistakes in the dialogues, for example in this last update there is a whole conversation where mister Himmell is a “she”, instead of a He. But the essence is clear enough, at least for people like myself that are not English native speakers.

Keep up the good Work. I will follow the game closely.

The conversation was terrible.
When a person is angry at another person for something.
The worst thing is that after handling the matter.
To ask for forgiveness in a frivolous manner.
This is the worst text I've ever seen.

Game version: 0.7

Pretty boring game, to sum it up.

The story begins interesting with an MC that both respects AND uses women. Women fall for him, because he has a big dick- that's where the game shifts into another generic game with generic scenes, characters and made me skip to 99% of the future text/ story until the end.
There are dozens or similar games here, with either the same engine, same animations and/or similar story.
At least some of them have much more sexual content at the same development stage; Project S.P.E.S. has way too few scenes.
Nothing sets this game apart, sadly.

I lost my last bit of interest in the latest version of 0.7, because the story continued to be boring af.

Not recommended.

This AVN isn't terrible, but it just can't meet my expectations for a story-focused AVN. The English translation is pretty bad, which doesn't help the fact this is supposed to be story-driven. Personally, I found the whole "he's just a friend" aspect to Sofi's relationship with the MC to be annoying and unrealistic. The MC is having sex with multiple women Sofi knows, even though every female seems to believe Sofi is completely in love with the MC, which is kinda crazy. It is so unrealistic and a tired trope of anime, manga, and AVN fans. Of all the women that are obsessed with the MC, that one who just sees him as a "friend" is the one he is most interested in. It's silly, especially when you consider what else he could have or do.

Beyond that, the models are attractive and the render quality is not bad, but there isn't a ton of sex scenes, which the writer states up front. I just couldn't overcome the language barrier within the writing.

Overall, my rating reflects the poor dialog and writing in an AVN that is focused on story and dialog. I sincerely hope the writer finds a suitable translator to help write it out.

A decent well-rounded game with a high 3s rating. The only thing to note is the main LI is a semi-tsundere so players who prefer a MC that goes around dominating girls or at least have girls throwing themselves at him will not like this game.

Story
MC lives in a country where citizens of different social classes stay at their respective zones. MC starts off in a lower middle class slave owning family who then receives an invitation to study at an elite school and stay with the daughter of an elite senator and a house servant / slave.

So far most of the interaction takes place either in the school or at home with the daughter Emi (your main tsundere LI) and centered around studies and club activities with some sci-fi mystery as a background.

The game is currently in a neither here nor there situation. It hints at some deeper sci-fi plot in the future but yet most of it plays out like a generic high school / college AVN. I hope there’s clarity in future versions.

Game Mechanics
More or less a kinetic novel, I haven’t seen any choices that branch out the story at this stage.

Background / Character Renders
SPES is a Honey Select game and with most of the story taking place at home and in schools, so it isn’t surprising to see large amounts of HS stock backgrounds deployed.

However the character renders are pleasant with evidence of detailed effort so they are much more pleasing than generic HS models. The main LI Emi is very well-designed and fits the expectations of a rich slightly spoiled brat with a generally positive character.

Character Development
This is a controversial area and source of most of the negative reviews. First off, at the start of the game you are led to believe that the MC’s childhood friend Sofi will be the main LI only to find out after a while that she’s just one of the many girls in MC’s harem.

Then comes the main LI Emi - she’s sort of a like her or hate her character. Players dislike her because she calls MC a pervert and sometimes disrespects him and get frustrated when MC does not “do something to put her in place”, others like me find her quite adorable because of her often conflicted disposition and attitudes towards MC.

Personally I don’t think it’s too much of a deal - the pervert thing lasted only a day and started to dissipate to the point that it only pops out rarely thereafter. I also disagree that MC is being a total wuss in not confronting Emi - their relationship is along the lines of squabbling long time friends or siblings and sometimes MC lets her have the last word out of deference to her father and/or being a gentleman.

Sex Scenes
The sex scenes pacing is a tad weird if you ask me. Players are treated with a deluge of them right at the start of the prologue involving Sofi and the slave that the family owns. Once MC moves to the school it trickles into a slow burn involving the Sara, Emi and other school mates.

Story wise it makes sense - after all you don’t just move into a totally new environment at the charity of an unknown powerful politician and start fucking any girl you see, but from a gameplay experience POV it sets expectations very high and then have things crash down which is not ideal.

Scene wise I would say they are so far above average. The animations and dialogue are good but camera angles are odd in some of them making some potentially steamy scenes look bleh.

BGM and Sound Effects
Decent BGMs that complement gameplay and minimal / no sound effects so far.

Conclusion
I like this game mainly because the LI designs are pleasing and unique, the relationship MC has with various LIs is enriching and varied, the relationship with Emi is quirky and entertaining at the same time and of course the sex scenes are good enough though not stellar.

However it also has room for improvement in terms of story direction (developer needs to decide whether he wants to focus on a school slice of life story or a sci-fi mystery one). The camera angling of some lewd scenes can be improved, sometimes it’s better to just learn from legends than reinvent the wheel.

(Review written at v0.5)

Decent-ish soundtrack, and nice renders. The story is... middling; it's somewhat interesting but it also progresses at a snail pace and the dialogue does it no favor (English does not seem to be the first language of the writer as it is filled with weird sentence constructions and small grammatical mistakes).

The characters are somewhat interesting but some of them are definitely a bit too forward without any reason, and some characters tend to lean too heavily into their tropes that they end up becoming considerably annoying.

As a detriment, the game is being touted as a 0.5, but honestly, that just means it's the fifth release, and it's clear the game is not going to go into 1.0 after 0.9 and reach a completed status. There's barely any content and I also cannot say that the choices we have so far do anything of relevance to the story other than one that immediately diverges you into an alternative ending.

With how short it currently is, there's also not much to comment on the story itself so far. It's not interesting, not groundbreaking, but might eventually prove to be good enough. Since none of the mystery undertones have been revealed it's rough to say whether it's got a positive future or not.

At the very least, it's not bad, but there's also nothing quite good here to look at just yet.

This game is like a fun, breezy ride through an entertaining, its not a groundbreaking story. Don't expect any major twists or deep character arcs—but it's enjoyable enough to keep you engaged. What really makes it shine is its humor. The game doesn't take itself too seriously, and neither should you. There are plenty of cheesy lines but all in good fun. It's a bit of a guilty pleasure of mine.

I felt mostly disengaged throughout my playthrough. I didn't feel like my choices matter or if there was anything it wasn't too memorable. Most of these games tend to look over the power of choices when developing VNs. AVN's a more than just yes or no choices (go with(A) or go with (B)). That's why most new VNs fail to draw a passionate audience because they fail to grasp the concept of making your players feel involved. If you want to be a hands-on creator and control the entirety of the story; make a kinetic novel (add the tag), but if you want to make a memorable VN focus on interactivity and choices.

v0.4 A well-constructed KN and a poly harem in the making

The Good:
-The best HS/HS2 models and visuals that I can remember. Teens, matures, and milfs all look stunning. A wide range of body types but no freakishly distorted proportions.
-Intriguing mystery underlying the action. Why has the mc been plucked from obscurity and given this opportunity.
-Minimal (and avoidable) info dumps explain the underpinnings of a society where poly harems are the norm (at least among class 1 citizens)
-Female characters have personalities and agency, I want to find out more about them before we end up in bed (romance is on the menu).
-The mc is neither a toxic jerk, nor oblivious virgin.
-Early consensual sex with childhood friend (with benefits) and slaves/servants but a slower burn with other potential harem members

Neutral:
-Big non-magical dick

Negative:
-Patreon only thus far, so future plot development may be restricted by censorship, or delayed due to time lapse for Subscribestar approval

Who should play this:
People who like poly harems and don't mind Kinetic Novels (at least thus far). People who like female characters with some complexity and agency. Tsundere fanciers (although there are plenty of other personalities on display). People who prefer romance over domination and exploitation.

Who should not:
People who hate Kinetic Novels, People who want monogamous relationships. People who fear catching lesbian cooties from their harem. People who think acting with kindness, politeness, and consideration towards a LI is being a simp and a doormat.

Still pretty early but solid story so far, very cute characters with decent personalities and good variation. Standard HS renders and animations well done, no bugs that I noticed. Looking forward to see how the relationships and story work out.

3.5 stars, rounding up to 4 to try to balance the reviewers that don't know what a kinetic novel is.

[0.7]
The game keep improving chapter after chapter. I like to play this game as I would enjoy to watch a good anime. The writing improved a lot since version 0.3 and the MC handle pretty well the 2 main girls (Sofia and Emilia).

This game is totaly underrated and deserve 5 stars, it's well above average now. We know a bit more bout the plot and the story progressed well. I get it many people hate tsundere and for most of the time they are right. But the MC is not a wimp, and know how to get to them. Instead of beeing annoying they become lovely.

For me the chapters are a bit short, so I comeback every 2 chapters. See you for v0.9.

Keep the good work.

Yet another doormat/illogical MC. First we get the mysterious scholarship for the MC to join a prestigious school. This leaves you with the only choice in the game where you either choose to walk away from the shady scholarship opportunity and live a happy life, or you choose to keep on going despite reservations. The only problem with the walking away ending is that the generic evil rich guy clearly has plans for you, so I find it hard to believe he'd just let you walk away. Then there's the special privileges given to the MC, which include a house, a hot maid, cohabitation with the rich guy's daughter, and some spending money. If your mind doesn't scream red flags with this then you're a moron. Also clearly there's no respect for the MC because rich guy's daughter calls you pervert and is a "tsundere", which all fine and good if you like that but that's not the case with this MC. Instead he just takes it all with no dignity. It also doesn't help with his image when he clearly aims to please at all turns helping at all times to all the girls. There is a fine line between being kind/gentlemanly and going into simping territory and this guy crossed that line. Finally, this last update with a servant that isn't willing to explain her motivations and gets away with basically saying "you won't force me to explain because you're not a bad person" was the last straw. Even if you want a servant the least you should do is be thorough and make sure they are loyal. The only reason it gets two stars is because the renders are decent enough to justify it.

version 0.3
well this was hard ,halfway i saw the kinetic novel tag ,and that stop me from enjoying this game,.
yeah the kinetic tag means that you cant choose who to fuck so,thats takes 1 star form the beggining,.
another star bcs same problem with choices....there isonly one in 30 of play and it was a ending...
graphics are standard for hs2 not the best not the worst,half star there .
mc is a semi doormat,with too much question and semi spinelees to ask the right ones....another half star,
i could take another 1 bcs well alltogheter is bad,.but i will leave the 2 for the dev to think about put some choices at least to choose the Li's

p.s: edited to version 0.6
ok the mc still goes all doormat till the event with sofi...and then oh shit sorry again.....but no plot hickening here like at all.we all waiting for the meeting with mr himmel,and dev is ranting ,....
on one scene sarah told him to dont question her,who is the fucking servant ?you or her? and why she give a answer that "you can focus on sofi or want the details to how i know the details?
ok the rating is still pretty the same without change but seems that the train is not moving forward.....same kinetic novel for us...