Ren'Py - Project V [v0.0.4] [Biterrois]

This game has a decent start and a lot of potential. The gameplay is a bit confusing at first but you can get the hang of it fast. I love the tags and fetishes involved and hope to see more futa and ntr especially. I would recommend a better system to get hints for the scenes especially the hidden ones/

Very promising game, the first scenes are well made and the movement is also great. It needs a bit of touch up on the map and on some locations but overall a really promising game, I hope it continues with frequent updates

[v0.0.3a]


⠀⠀⠀The plot set-up: You're jobless self-deprecating below average looking gaming nerd. Your online friend (brunette girl from the banner) sets you up with her friend (blonde girl) and you two start going out. Your relationship progresses very slow, as you're too shy to make a move. Then one day brunette girl sucked you off and you get some kind of psychic superpowers as well as voices in your head. It turned out that this new entity in your head is slowly consuming your mind and to stop that you have to establish intimate connections with as many people as possible, and so MC's quest to build a harem begins. The quality of writing so far is okay, pretty serviceable, I haven't found anything egregious yet.
⠀⠀⠀Erotic scenes feel disconnected from the narrative and lack necessary context to truly engage the audience. It's essentially "let's fuck", then black screen, then several animations play out, then black screen again and you're immediately thrown back into the sandbox. I can't even qualify that as a proper sex scene, because there isn't even any dialogue here, just soulless animation viewer. Also to keep players attention, most "sex scenes" at the beginning are dream sequences or visions. The MC only gets oral so far. About netorare: your mom gets regularly railed by a black guy, who's a subordinate of your father. These scenes can be disabled via PC in your room.
⠀⠀⠀The sandbox is a heavy WIP, and doesn't feature many activities right now. So far you wake up -> do all available activities in your house -> collect orbs -> maybe go to job -> sleep, repeat. At least you don't have to follow annoying schedule with day/night cycle and different days of the week.

The text quickly skipping itself to demonstrate one character interrupting another is annoying. It's tied to 'text speed', so if you've got it maxed out in the settings, then phrases are gonna get skipped almost instantly.

Playtime: an hour.