VN - Ren'Py - QOSM: A Mom NTR [v1.0] [MGDgames]

I think you should take more care of the character, such as making the mother's figure slimmer, as well as making the renders better. The game's colors are also something that I think should be given more attention. . This will help the game reach more players than it currently does. Good luck! Hope great things will come to you!

v1.0 is pretty average in terms of story, it's really short and kinda dumb. I enjoyed the scenes for what they were and the CG was done nicely. I saw in comments that dev is trying to take feedback to make the story better amd I hope they suceed for the next ver.

Five minute VN with two decent IR porn scenes.

The writing may be a bit unbelievable but that's OK for a VN since it's about the porn. The writing is short and gets to the point so you can get to the scenes which is good. The scenes are nothing special themselves, with some looping animations and sound and that's it.

1.0

it's quite short. and really dumb. like extreme dumb porn logic. Marquis (the black guy) who wants to fuck the asian chick (the mother) meets her, then 5min later dresses as a waiter to drug her, then fucks her and she is kinda consenting due to drugs but it's rape.

i think it's hot. the story+grammar+writing would give it 1/5. but the rape aspect and future blackmail or NTR/incest aspect imo is very good like 4/5 or 5/5. so all in all 3/5. very few games nowadays have this evil types of characters and rapes. so that's a plus too.

and ofc the antagonist is "obviously" a black guy, so if you dont like the stereotype and simpleness of the "story" then nobody is forcing you to play. but i think it's kinda fun if you put aside your virtue signaling and your brain because if you try to play this game with turned on brain then it will definitely get damaged lol.

An excellent story with a captivating development along with beautiful graphics... it is something you will not find here, this is another game with a rapid development that seeks to exploit the hackneyed stereotype of "white, young, small and pathetic MC loses his wife at the hands of a black man who has no talent.

Recommended only if you are very desperate for a game with a QoS theme and have already seen others.