v0.05
Story is inventive take on boy living in house with gorgeous women. Very simple base plot, with a nice addition of these other people controlling/manipulating/spying our hero and women in the house. Setting does give good amount of tools to make it deeper than just the main girls.
Writing is just bad. MC is annoying kid and women are unnaturally horny, because the plot. It is fun for a while, but mindless sex scene to sex scene does get boring pretty fast. The whole setting screams character leaning sexual build up, but writing fails miserably on it.
Visually game is great. But as it is kinetic novel with bad writing, only thing left is sexy pictures and animations. But even those don´t really work, when the pictures draw an atmosphere of cocky MC harassing simple minded adults.
This game really needs some major plot twist to shake things up. And either double down on MC´s creepiness or have him start to act like decent human. Now he acts just like an asshole.
					Story is inventive take on boy living in house with gorgeous women. Very simple base plot, with a nice addition of these other people controlling/manipulating/spying our hero and women in the house. Setting does give good amount of tools to make it deeper than just the main girls.
Writing is just bad. MC is annoying kid and women are unnaturally horny, because the plot. It is fun for a while, but mindless sex scene to sex scene does get boring pretty fast. The whole setting screams character leaning sexual build up, but writing fails miserably on it.
Visually game is great. But as it is kinetic novel with bad writing, only thing left is sexy pictures and animations. But even those don´t really work, when the pictures draw an atmosphere of cocky MC harassing simple minded adults.
This game really needs some major plot twist to shake things up. And either double down on MC´s creepiness or have him start to act like decent human. Now he acts just like an asshole.