MC is a sissy.
The lines inside are often "Am I dreaming?" "In my dream..."...What the hell is this? He has been awake for several years...Do ordinary people react like this?
The tone of MC's words to others and the thoughts in his head always show that he is a weak and unconfident person. Can't his personality be more confident?
Although he was in a coma for 10 years, he woke up for almost 10 years, but he still thinks like a teenager? He can only think of women in his dreams? What kind of loser is this?
In addition, what the hell is the narrator? Can't the author directly use italics or boldface? There are too many narrations, which is very annoying.
Nickname...Everyone has to take a nickname...
On the first day a group of girls moved in, can you just call them by their nicknames?
I don't know why the author is so attached to this meaningless title...
Many details of this game really need to be improved.
The lines inside are often "Am I dreaming?" "In my dream..."...What the hell is this? He has been awake for several years...Do ordinary people react like this?
The tone of MC's words to others and the thoughts in his head always show that he is a weak and unconfident person. Can't his personality be more confident?
Although he was in a coma for 10 years, he woke up for almost 10 years, but he still thinks like a teenager? He can only think of women in his dreams? What kind of loser is this?
In addition, what the hell is the narrator? Can't the author directly use italics or boldface? There are too many narrations, which is very annoying.
Nickname...Everyone has to take a nickname...
On the first day a group of girls moved in, can you just call them by their nicknames?
I don't know why the author is so attached to this meaningless title...
Many details of this game really need to be improved.