Seems like there could be a very decent visual novel here, but the dialogue is really bad to the point I gave up pretty quickly. This is first and foremost a "Visual Novel" so you would hope the writing would have a lot more effort put in to it. The dialogue felt so forced and unnatural even by AVN standards, and barely made sense from what little of it I read before I gave up.
Again, the potential is there if not for the dodgy dialogue and Engrish.
Again, the potential is there if not for the dodgy dialogue and Engrish.