Rate my 3rd character: Veronika

[Mastur Bar]

Sup guys!
I'm bringing one more character to you rate.

That's my third one.
Her name is Veronika and she has the tiny 18 years old archetype.
I would like to hear your opinions on her too.

What I have to improve it and what do you think I got it right.
Let me know about it on the comments.

One more time, thanks for all the feedback.

EDIT: There are some changes that I made in the new version:

• I removed the "winkles" on her nose.
• I made her thinner.
• I made her ass less wider.
• I made their thighs thinner.
• I made her waist subtly thinner.

Face


Body Front


Body Back

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[Yngling]

I really like her, but:
- The tip of the nose has some weird wrinkle
- She's not the tiny 18 years old archetype, rather an average young adult (18-24 or so). I can see she's not tall (maybe 1.60m?) but for tiny she needs to lose another 10 kg or maybe even more.

The face (minus the nose) is beautiful! Especially the eyes.

 

[Mastur Bar]

I really like her, but:
- The tip of the nose has some weird wrinkle
- She's not the tiny 18 years old archetype, rather an average young adult (18-24 or so). I can see she's not tall (maybe 1.60m?) but for tiny she needs to lose another 10 kg or maybe even more.

The face (minus the nose) is beautiful! Especially the eyes.

I don't get what you wanted to mean with "winkles", maybe some details in her nose?
I think it's because of the illumination, I'll take a better look.

I kind of have to give her some adult appearance because of Patreon's (And Anywhere) policies that forbid underage characters, so I'm unsure about making her even thinner.
She is the smallest character in the game in terms of height, although I haven't defined her height in numbers yet.

 

[Yngling]

 

[Yngling]

I kind of have to give her some adult appearance because of Patreon's (And Anywhere) policies that forbid underage characters, so I'm unsure about making her even thinner.
She is the smallest character in the game in terms of height, although I haven't defined her height in numbers yet.

Thin does not equal underage... (adding a bit of pubic hair helps also)

On your model, the boobs are fine, but for a thin / tiny look, the hips, ass and thighs could be a bit smaller in my opinion, without making her look underage / loli.

F95Zone uses the difference between post-pubescent (allowed) and pre-pubescent (not allowed), where signs of puberty include breasts and pubic hair. Post-pubescent girls can still look quite young, even though over 18, there are several pornstars like that, even though quite a few of those may be borderline anorexic (different topic).

In most of the allowed "loli" games, it's mostly the face which makes a character look (too) young.

Your face looks completely age appropriate for a young adult, wouldn't change a thing (except maybe the nose issue).

Obviously 3D renders don't have a birth certificate so proving her "age" is very difficult and open for all kinds of interpretation. How much you want to approach the limit depends on the kind of game you want to make and the kind of story you want to tell.

 

[Doorknob22]

1. I love the “girl next door” look of your characters.
2. I think that about 80% of the voters don’t actually need the labels “Face”, “Body Front” and “Body back” and will be able to figure it out on their own

 

[Mastur Bar]

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Hmm, I believe it's caused by a specific morph, I'll fix it.

Thin does not equal underage... (adding a bit of pubic hair helps also)

On your model, the boobs are fine, but for a thin / tiny look, the hips, ass and thighs could be a bit smaller in my opinion, without making her look underage / loli.

F95Zone uses the difference between post-pubescent (allowed) and pre-pubescent (not allowed), where signs of puberty include breasts and pubic hair. Post-pubescent girls can still look quite young, even though over 18, there are several pornstars like that, even though quite a few of those may be borderline anorexic (different topic).

In most of the allowed "loli" games, it's mostly the face which makes a character look (too) young.

Your face looks completely age appropriate for a young adult, wouldn't change a thing (except maybe the nose issue).

Obviously 3D renders don't have a birth certificate so proving her "age" is very difficult and open for all kinds of interpretation. How much you want to approach the limit depends on the kind of game you want to make and the kind of story you want to tell.

Okay, I'll make some changes and post here to you give your opinions on that.

1. I love the “girl next door” look of your characters.
2. I think that about 80% of the voters don’t actually need the labels “Face”, “Body Front” and “Body back” and will be able to figure it out on their own

Hahaha! Fine.

 

[Yngling]

Okay, I'll make some changes and post here to you give your opinions on that.

Looking forward to it, but just to be clear: I don't think there is anything wrong with her body. It's just that it is not the " tiny 18 years old archetype " that you are looking for. In my opinion. It's rather a 18-20-something girl next door type. Beautiful, but not tiny.

 

[TheCragger]

Her head seems a bit too big for her body making her look even younger then you intend. To the point that for me that is definite NOPE territory.

 

[Mastur Bar]

Looking forward to it, but just to be clear: I don't think there is anything wrong with her body. It's just that it is not the " tiny 18 years old archetype " that you are looking for. In my opinion. It's rather a 18-20-something girl next door type. Beautiful, but not tiny.

It took me a while to respond this time, but I finally made the corrections to it.

These are the changes that I made in the new version:

• I removed the "winkles" on her nose.
• I made her thinner.
• I made her ass less wider.
• I made their thighs thinner.
• I made her waist subtly thinner.

What do you think about the results?

PS: The images are in the OP.

Her head seems a bit too big for her body making her look even younger then you intend. To the point that for me that is definite NOPE territory.

Does she look so young that it bothers you?

 

[TheCragger]

It took me a while to respond this time, but I finally made the corrections to it.

These are the changes that I made in the new version:

• I removed the "winkles" on her nose.
• I made her thinner.
• I made her ass less wider.
• I made their thighs thinner.
• I made her waist subtly thinner.

What do you think about the results?

PS: The images are in the OP.


Does she look so young that it bothers you?

As is, I would be uncomfortable watching a sexual scene with her. There is a reason a lot of 'shortstacks' halfings/goblins/dwarves etc. in the games around here tend to give exaggerated hips, breasts, etc. to offset the child like look of bodies with larger head to body ratios.

See at birth a human brain is about 1/4th of the size of an adult's but by the age of 5 the brain and thus the skull is nearly fully grown to adult size while the body itself has a long way to go. Thus instinctually we associate an oversized head with children and dwarfism.

 

[Mastur Bar]

As is, I would be uncomfortable watching a sexual scene with her. There is a reason a lot of 'shortstacks' halfings/goblins/dwarves etc. in the games around here tend to give exaggerated hips, breasts, etc. to offset the child like look of bodies with larger head to body ratios.

See at birth a human brain is about 1/4th of the size of an adult's but by the age of 5 the brain and thus the skull is nearly fully grown to adult size while the body itself has a long way to go. Thus instinctually we associate an oversized head with children and dwarfism.

Hmm, I see.
But you know that there are some women who, despite being older and having a certain age, they have small bodies, the so-called petites.
The character in question was meant to be a petite.

 

[Yngling]

It took me a while to respond this time, but I finally made the corrections to it.

These are the changes that I made in the new version:

• I removed the "winkles" on her nose.
• I made her thinner.
• I made her ass less wider.
• I made their thighs thinner.
• I made her waist subtly thinner.

What do you think about the results?

PS: The images are in the OP.


Does she look so young that it bothers you?

Looks great to me!

What TheCragger means (I think) is just that she's quite short. Adults (including petites) have a different head/body ratio, purely in terms of length. That's also what I meant with my previous question regarding her "real" height. It could be useful to pose her next to a normal (i.e. 1.80m) male and see the size difference to see if it looks weird.

 

[Mastur Bar]

Looks great to me!

What TheCragger means (I think) is just that she's quite short. Adults (including petites) have a different head/body ratio, purely in terms of length. That's also what I meant with my previous question regarding her "real" height. It could be useful to pose her next to a normal (i.e. 1.80m) male and see the size difference to see if it looks weird.

Well, to be honest, she should have something around 1.55m ~ 1.60m, as she is the smaller character in the game.
I don't have the same feeling about the head and body proportions, but I'll take a look about what I can do.