I dont know if I have the right to criticise when I self cant create such models since Im just on the receiving end. I take what I get and if a game would came out with such models I would try it. If it has the content I can disgest of course.
In my personal taste, I very very like the model of Felicity (6).
Her face proportions are very nice. A bit edge on the cheeks and chin to make her look rebellious/dangerous but not to much so she keeps her female looks.
Perhaps adding a little bit of flesh on the cheeks could make it even look better ?
But the long hair with the plain/smooth red colour just keeps me looking at her. Thats a big plus from my site.
Perhaps its just the lighting but here she looks gorgeous:
If I should put them into ranking lists then Felicity (6) would be Nr.1
Nr.2 is kinda tricky since I cant decide who of them should get it.
Clarissa (4) has this straight light braun hair ( I dont care if some people would call it "natural" blonde, I already had so much fights about this) and mixed with these expressions kinda reminds me of "Avril Lavigne" when she was younger but better.
From looking "serious" to "charming" her facial expressions keeps looking great, which I dont see that much in porn games since many times they just look weird.
The other one who is sharing my Nr.2 is Lorie (7).
Blonde, cute looking but on the same time gives me some adult vibes from her. You know, like "these" typical 18 years old brats who knows it better but in reality they dont since they dont have the experience which makes them kinda adorable in my eyes.
Well, thats what I get from looking at this picture of her. I hope I dont read to much into it.
Since I dont know what her character is I will just roll with what I see and say that her whole package is nice.
On my Nr.3 place is Aoko (2).
I like that she looks asian. And like with Lorie, since I dont know what her character is, I dont know what I should change on her since she looks pretty nice.
Nr.4 would be Jodie (5)
The reason why she is this low on my list is because she looks old on some poses.
On the left she looks very young and I want more of her, but when I look on the right site it seems like she is some one who is in their 35. So I dunno if its just some lighting issues or the expressions itself
On Nr.5 is Astrid (3)...which is kinda a shame since I like older business (senpai) woman
Dont get me wrong here, its just that from this picture she is supposed to be some one older. Like some one in her 30, max 35 ? But still, I dont feel it. The "milf" look is kinda missing here. If she supposed to be some one younger then I would say that her face dosent look at all like one.
On the left she kinda looks decent, but on the right not so much.
The last place goes to Savannah (1). Also here a shame since I like these type of girls too.
I like her hairstyle, I also like the piercings but I just cant help myself to think she looks uncanny valley the more I look at her.
On the left she looks decent but on the right site she looks weird. The cheekbones are to visible which kinda makes her looking old in some poses/lighting.
Got to be honest with you, they all look unappealing. (Maybe beside Jodie)
Ako and Clarissa - I've seen these models before in other games. These just looks slightly better.
The Rest - nothing special.
Some changes: Not sure but to maybe play a bit more with body shapes/sizes? Because right now they all look like they have the same body with different heads. It also needs age variety. Right now they all look to be around the same age which I don't think is what you're going for. And finally the fashion (clothes) could be better.
Don't get me wrong, these are definitely above average (B grade) but I feel like you can do better. Btw Jodie rework you did looks good as well if you're aiming for her to be mid 20s. Render closer to the original would be better if you want to make her to be around 18-20.
Got to be honest with you, they all look unappealing. (Maybe beside Jodie)
Ako and Clarissa - I've seen these models before in other games. These just looks slightly better.
The Rest - nothing special.
Some changes: Not sure but to maybe play a bit more with body shapes/sizes? Because right now they all look like they have the same body with different heads. It also needs age variety. Right now they all look to be around the same age which I don't think is what you're going for. And finally the fashion (clothes) could be better.
Don't get me wrong, these are definitely above average (B grade) but I feel like you can do better. Btw Jodie rework you did looks good as well if you're aiming for her to be mid 20s. Render closer to the original would be better if you want to make her to be around 18-20.
You definitely haven't seen Clarissa in a game before because she, along with Savannah, are custom characters built from facegens without premade character morphs. Astrid and Lorie are both combinations of several character morphs with lots of additional adjustments. Those four form the core storyline while the others are peripheral characters and are a bit more generic with less "camera time".
I appreciate the feedback!