VN - Ren'Py - Re Even [v0.2.5] [ReEven Studio]

The pacing is an atrocity. MC gets out of prison and his aunt jokes about him looking at her tits? And his best friend's aunt offers him a HJ immediately? Writing is also off with some weird word choice. Graphics are a bit dated but that would be fine if the story were more the focus.

Game has potential good story so far , good story line eager for the next update hope you guys can pull off awesome future updates,
Just needs minor polish (a few typo fixes, smoother transitions). Huge potential this could be a classic! Keep going!

Excellent start!

The dialogue is engaging and interesting . The characters are endearing and beautiful. Dev is doing a good job with the world building and lore. There isn't much there at the moment, but it is still worth trying.

Good luck Dev. This project seems very promising and I hope you stick to it!

A little rough around the edges. Could use a good proofreader. Lots of phrases with no breaks in the dialogue where there should be. Some grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes. Could also use a little foreshadowing or at least exposition on the new world our MC gets thrown into after returning home. It was pretty out of nowhere AND unceremonious for being such an important part of the narrative.

All that being said, I really like it. Premise is familiar which makes it cozy. A nice mix of multiple popular tropes. Ladies are cute. Everything I mentioned above isn't hard to improve on or even fix retroactively so I remain optimistic.

Big improvement since the - demo dev’s really leveling up

Honestly, it’s kinda sad seeing someone drop a 1-star on a new game just from the old demo. That’s exactly how good projects end up dying early. The new release v0.2.5 shows how much the dev has improved you can clearly tell they’re trying and doing a solid job.

The story’s a bit hard to digest at first, but I actually see the vision now. It’s got that mix of mystery and isekai-style fantasy. The reworked prologue makes the setup make a lot more sense.

The dev listens to feedback and keeps improving with updates. It’s miles ahead of the demo version, I’m excited to see where it goes next.

Story: 4.0 ( Good writing, plot's weaving together nice. )

Art & Animations: 5 ( really smooth and well timed fits the tone perfectly. )

Sound: 5/5 ( music fits the mood perfectly. )

Gameplay: 4/5 ( smooth, not too click-heavy anymore. )

For a solo dev this project has huge potential. You can tell they actually care.

Demo reveiw
1. The prologue feels rushed and not much is there. Father gets stabbed by an unknown guy, police show up, and you (a kid) get framed by a corrupt high official.
2. MC meets the maid and family, but the two youngest girls call him brother, but I thought he went to his aunts?
3. he goes to meet his female childhood best friend, and they act like nothing happened or was missed.
4. Of course, another MC with a 13-inch dick and gets jerked off by his friend's aunt?
Unnecessary clicks mark the end of the 4-5 minute read demo.

Story: Not much story here, another fantasy game, with little story. MC's dad gets involved in something big and makes MC swallow a pearl of some kind when he's a kid. MC agrees with no objection.

I guess okay for a new developer, but overall it's not worth the download.
Dev is learning about animations, even though it's not the best; learn as you go.