VN - Ren'Py - Rebel Duet [v0.10b] [ionDivvy]

A game with a good story and who is bad and who is good, a demon or a witch ? and why ? what is the story behind the witch ? is it possible to chance her mind ? for me good questions but i will see how the story continue. i like the bound between the MC( i choice female ) and the succubus (maybye the MC fall in love ), good scenes and good pictures .the succubus is more like a bodyguard but maybye the MC learn to defense himself and help the succubus more by the fights, i say very intersting the progress and a great potential of the game too or perhaps i thinking wrong, i will see.

I'm not going to give a full mark on this one, mostly because of the sex scenes.

Don't get me wrong, they look fine, however, the story will have you redo them several times, and more than likely this is going to keep happening as it's an integral part of the story. The problem being: after you've seen them once, it's just becoming a chore. After you've done all the positions and choices of the main action, redoing them over and over every couple of days, just brings nothing new for the player.
Seeing as they've got a counter as well (up to 100, everytime gives you a couple more points in that position), this is going to be something going on for a very long time more than likely.

A skip button once we've seen them all, would probably be an improvement in my opinion, as this is just going to be boring very quickly.

The story and renders however, are really above average.
The writing's fine, the story's fine, the characters are above the usual stuff we see as well.

This game certainly has some potential, but the dev really need to think about the near daily sex interaction bit in my opinion.

I'd still recommend this game despite the sex "grind".

review for 0.6 (played as female protag)

one of my favorite lesbian games so far, hot main LI, pretty good renders and it has animations (even if it is just one small animation in each scene i appreciate every lesbian game that does at least have animations) story seems pretty good so far compared to the devs first game so i hope it continues like this bc it has a ton of potential to become a great game for the pure lesbian niche genre.

edited the rating for version 0.8 (-1 star) because it feels like a lot of possible scenes between the mc and some other protagonists are dragged out by endless teasing and conversations without any relationship improvment

Not much here so far, but the writing is already really good and the renders are fantastic. There's not much story wise yet but it seems to be promising. The only thing that could be negative is the "training" system which might not be very good as you can end up just repeating multiple scenes over and over, and even the dialogue in them is the exact same. Aside from that, it looks like it will be a great game.

The game is still in its very early stages but shows a lot of promise.

I'm really intrigued by the "training" mechanic for the MC and Val. I also like that you start out with some reasonable options rather than being forced to work your way through seemingly infinite handjobs (as some other games do).

So far, one of the best fleshed out story lines for a beginning game. and one of a handful games waiting to see what happens next. Has huge potential with the multiple countries and cultures. very ambitious and hoping it stays around. Not too many choices right now but with establishing the characters and the world kind of makes sense. Potentially huge decision with the last available option in this version. it did feel like the choices I made in the beginning of my character did affect my story.

Absolutly LOVED this.. as a writer myself i long ago penned a similar story with a crossing between the real and fantasy realms so this was a fun reminder of that work..
I love the characters so far and the visuals are pretty stunning at times..
Hope this one gets the support it needs and the writer can deliver on what could be a really good VN