VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - REBEL [v0.2] [Makunight]

Really enjoyed the game, good models and storyline, but english could use some work. Looking forward to future updates! I can't wait to see how the storyline progresses between the MC's sister, daughter, and nephew. Should be really good

Good work ! models are hot, nice rendering, i'm waiting for longer content on this way, i liked how the story goes and was disappointed when it stops. Keep on going this way. thanks
Do you expect an incest patch to have the real story ? because this modified one is a bit confusing sometimes

Rebel is a game created by Makunight where it's about a 18 year old girl who's into her "rebellious phase" (she got expelled from 4 schools) as you play her father to try to restore your life while maintaining order in your household while also being a rich, successful writer that has to raise her somewhat by himself as he's also divorced.

In this story he is 38 years old, in great shape, is good looking, and seems open minded when it comes to conflict with his daughter. Because of this you are given 2 choices on how to approach this game: Strict or Chill.

Seeing how this is currently a short game I personally tried both options and the daughter indeed behave differently in the choices, but thing is after you make the choices there doesn't seem much follow-up.

Might as well get the elephant out of the room. The English translation is sub-par. Apparently the Dev used Google Translate for English. Didn't even bother replacing something simple as "ajajaja!!" to either "lol!" or "hahaha!". There are many aps for translations these days. Google Translate is flawed. Has been for years. Come on man smh. Good news the Dev assured us this will be corrected in future updates. Here's hoping.

The Father's sister Megan plays a big role in this game. While she has a very bangable body, she is also the X-factor to the daughter's behavior as she happens to be a full blown Party Girl. Apparently as teenagers the siblings had a sexual relationship, and it's clear in this story their fling is far from over.

Speaking of Party Girls the daughter is indeed one. Not to spoil too much, but she's a handful in this game, and very "defenseless" in the house as if daring her father to make a move on her. On the other hand she's also clearly asking for it.

Lastly there's Lucy who is the niece. In terms of behavior she's the only normal person in this game. However look-wise that's another story. She doesn't look 18.

Pros
- Daughter & Megan have great bodies
- Lots of nudity
- Can make a Lazy Sunday by playing both paths of this game

Cons
- English translation
- No actual sex scenes (I'm not counting the bj)
- Choices don't seem to matter
- Lucy's appearance
- No music of any kind (I'm not counting the ring tone)
- Game is short (currently)

Verdict: If you have 1-2 hours to kill during the evening then dive right in and try out both versions. However this is far from a Fap N Go type of game. It's not even Fap Worthy. Will check back in 2021 when this game gets bigger, and there's actual sex scenes.

Shaping up to be an excellent game. The models are great too. In time once the game gets a little bit bigger, I hope the author goes back and polishes some of the animations, but even if he doesn't, it will be a great game regardless. What a time to be alive. 3D assets have come such a long way in such a short amount of time. What used to be a cutting edge animation even 10 years ago is standard now. I'm not complaining. More fap material for me!

v0.2
-Interesting models, though very unpolished.

-Lighting and backgrounds could be better adjusted.

-Writing is not the best, both dialogue and story (which is kinda ironic since MC is presented as a famous author).

-The game can be played in both spanish and in english and seeing that the game UI starts out in spanish and has to be changed into english as well that text in renders is also spanish it's easy to see which language is prioritized by the Dev.

-The amount of game/VN so far is consisitent with only two updates.

I give it 2/5 for now and might come back to it later

The renders are good except for the young blonde girl (she's just weird looking).
The writing however is pretty terrible and needs a lot of help. The translation is awful and the way everyone acts just doesn't really make sense.
Dev should really get help from a writer and a native english speaker.

I'm a fan of games with incest in them and this game seemingly will have father-daughter and brother-sister incest too which is great, but the grammar and the writing is just horrible.
The translation is barely legible and some cases make no sense at all. Probably it's made with MTL. This is relatively easy to fix with a human translator but what I understood from the story tells me that the writing has problems too. Seriously what was that all my clothes are too small so my tits hang out from the top thing?
Based on the description the game is about a divorced father trying to deal with his rebellious teenage daughter. This has a lot of potential and could be a great game. But what we got instead is a MC who is called overly strict because he doesn't want his daughter to dress like a crack whore and drink herself aggressive or unconscious every day. What a horrible man!
In the decisions you can choose to be "strict" (actually just behave like a normal human being) or try to be understanding towards your daughter and be more indulgent. Some decisions result in different sexy scenes or images so probably the game will have multiple routes and different endings.

Graphics are passable. Daughter and Sister look nice. The face of the niece looks strange on some images. The animations are not that good, the one where the sister is training kicks looks simply horrible.

The amount of content after the second update is still minimal. The whole game is only few minutes long. There are some nude and partially nude images and a sex scene, but all of them are too short to be used as fap material.

Conclusion: The game needs serious amount of quality control. Especially with the dialogue writing and translation, but maybe dev should take another look and tone down the retardness of daughter. If her rebelliousness was on a more reasonable level it would be easier to sympathize with her which would give more weight to the decisions and motivation for the player to follow a certain path instead of just checking out the erotic scenes.

The art style is nice and the characters are original looking, unlike 90% of 3d porn games which always use the same hair style and models. The grammar is distracting at the moment but I have faith the author can fix that when he gets around to it.

I really wanted to like this game, because the daughter is kind of cute and tbh, compared to son-mother stories, daughter-father is very much under-represented, but alas the game just isn't good.

Now, yes the dev isn't a native English speaker, but what's wrong with the writing isn't due to that, even if you take it into account the behaviour of the characters is erratic, makes no sense and is in no way how anybody would behave. Including the really weird noises, which are probably supposed to be laughter.

There are the dreaded no-choices, when the game pauses to give you a single option to press, completely unnecessary and at least one time you can decide to do one thing, but in the next scene the dad will act as if you never made that decision.

Also, what is it with showing guys pissing out of giant dicks, why do we see this ego-perspective shot in so many games?
Personally, I don't much mind watching my own dick, while peeing, but that's about the amount of dicks I want to see doing that, mine and mine alone.
And peeing besides the toilet, with a visible piss puddle? That's just gross.

The artwork is okay, nothing special, writing and characters are bad, there's not much to redeem this game, sorry.

-well, it's my first time rating a game. It is somewhat short, but it is understandable, since it is a version 0.1. so I will not judge the duration. I know that as it updates it will have more and more content.


-the renders are cute, well, sexy, we don't come here to see teddy bears but beautiful women XD

- Another interesting point, very interesting, is that we can have something with our sister, who, unlike almost all incest-type games, is already an adult woman and not a girl who seems 15 years old. I do not play the typical incest games with young sisters. but I'll be honest a milf sister, it's something refreshing huh innovative


in terms of points against.

-I hope not only focus on young girls, I want to pray to God that he also gives love to the sister.

-I see that many complain about English. There I can't judge, since I played in Spanish and I didn't see any problem.

-finally I wish you good luck and more content with sister XD

I give the game a bonus star for the main premise of corrupting a teenaged daughter. Every other setting with similar quality would deserve only one or two stars.

The general rendering quality is decent. Not bad, but not great either. The daughter's model is very good though, and the posing is OK as well.

That's pretty much all the good things I have to say about the game.
The writing especially is atrocious. There are obvious spelling mistakes in seemingly every sentence, and overall many things the characters say are just nonsensical. It reminds me of earlier versions of that terrible Russian "witch trainer" knockoff. Many words and most of them are garbage.

I hope the developer gets someone else who can take over all the writing, then the game has good potential.

[v0.1]
Ok, so, first things first. You need an editor, man. Like, really. REALLY. I mostly get what the sentences are saying, but that's it. It hurts to read.

Really short, not much content, this is basically a teaser.

Not much of a story, but the setting is alright, I guess.
Renders are.. acceptable.
Please normalize your sound volume across tracks. That Skype ringtone almost gave me a heart attack.
Not much in terms of music/ambiance otherwise.
Saves seem to ignore your custom names, after loading you get defaults.
UI is basically default.

More effort is required. Needs content. Keep working. Lots of places to improve upon.