HTML - RedStone [v0.1 Hotfix] [MoonlightCatz]

[0.1-hotfix] It was very fun to play. No crashes, despite early version. Interesting story, good writing. What I appreciate is that there are no dead-end story-threads, and especially that the story and character set does not change frequently (or in this case at all). Not sure how much of the content I have seen, but I like it when someone focuses on few-but-good characters.
Can't wait to see this blossom.

Story wise, game deserve 1/10 mark. there is so many plot-holes,so many vague and just dumb decisions. Part with suit and almost everything else afterwards is just ridiculous .

Game-play wise, it is clear 0/10 mark. It is slow, really slow (and I have played only hotfix version). So, either speed up the game again, or implement ''skip'' or fast-forward button. Mini games are very simple, but poorly implemented and especially first mini game is problem, because game itself is slowing down player and then suddenly, you have 12 seconds to resolve mini puzzle which you see first time. Also, you should choose different color variety for first mini game to make proper contrast so it is easier to resolve puzzle. Very important - I'm too lazy to play → Win option in mini games needs to be changed into: I do not want to play this same stupid fucking minigame 49th time in a row two times per each in-game day.

It is grindy, on level with old Japanese Wolf-RPG games, maybe even worse and on top of that content is absolutely poor. I've spent more that 55 in-game days and I am still stuck on step 5 (HJ is still not an option at all). I had to grind for more than 40 in-game days (approx. 2.5 hours) just to get first picture of naked woman. Before that, only sexual content were two very unclear, dark gifs of some, I presume girl, jerking black cock and two or three gifs of some white guy jerking his cock. I am not sure is this bug or not, but I've checked this again, Anna's in-game training status is Body: 98; Ass: 104, Relationship with Bob: 20; ''Slutness'': 10; and there is still no option to advance.

Audio/Music - played game on mute after first few seconds. Not sure are there any sounds at all.

Tl;Dr: I spent an hour to suck an old guy's cock.

Game is mostly average considering the genre it's in. The story, while not perfect, is serviceable (although I suspect AI for most of it), doesn't look painful on the eyes, and the first part with the intro is alright.

What sucks hard is the "gameplay". It's a grind of chores with nothing interesting happening, lack of actual feedback as to what to do or what's happening, and slow as shit. You got to do all the chores each day or else Bob gets mad, slowing your progress. At least, I think it slows progress. Often it's really unclear as to what the hell to do. Like later on you can jerk Bob off and get some slutiness up, after enough you suck his dick. But jerking him off outside doesn't do this, that's disconnected. Or you need to get caught by the mutant gathering food but I think that's a random event.

You can also work out but I have no idea if that's needed or what the numbers equate to. You'll be clicking on links over and over and over and over and over again until something slightly different happens. There could have been something alright here but as it stands I can't recommend wasting your time gathering bugs and cleaning the room forever just to suck an old guy's dick.

Reasonably well-written with some good (and some not-so-good) graphics. Twitch minigame is a major malus, because the player can barely see the images that are to0 be manipulated, plus the fact that it's a Fucking Twitch Minigame (FTM).

Gameplay is super-repetitive, with no real objective other than to click the links the dev wants you to click and no real decisions to be made. Also locks up sometimes while getting water (presumably while trying and failing to load the FTM.

The game shows promise, though (due to the writing). It just needs to add a whole lot of gameplay and some random events while eliminating the lock-ups and FTM.

Okay, this is a good game for a first demo (v0.1).

+ There are a variety of pornographic events, lots of them (for now it's masturbation, HJ, BJ; don't expect pissing and gangbangs from the first slides).
+ The plot and setting are generally pleasant (and rare for porn games).
+ Decent text (at least not the meaningless and endless walls of text from the GPT chat).

- In some places, the text and images appear too slowly; it's better to leave the slow image fade-in only for important slides.
- There are no erotic events at the beginning (prologue, chapter 1), although they could be added; there's potential for that.
- Many passages lack images; even simple AI images would look better than nothing.

So, I give it 5 stars in advance.
All the downsides are easily corrected and are subjective.
Good luck and success to the author.)