VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Redwood [v0.08] [edenSin Games]

The story is kinda sluggish and throws us right into this violent mess at the beginning but it gets better. I really liked the character design of the friend's sister( the redhead of the cover). There are some inconsistencies with the plot and some characters at first but they are very minor for me at least. The sex scenes are really low as of this update but still enjoyed it.

The characters and renders are good but the dialogues, writing and the English is very bad. The MC is literally crying in one frame over the death of his friend and in the very next frame he is horny as fuck. Characters' behaviour do not make sense a lot of time. The English is bad but not much of a problem. The real problem is the dialogues. They seem very immature.

Honestly, the starting was bland and boring, but the last update made up for all a flaws it had till now. I would have rated it 1/2 stars after playing the first part till 0.05 version. The renders are pretty impressive, the plot has become much better and lastly, there are choices and they do have consequences in the later part of the story. Thanks dev for sharing this game. I was disappointed on the emd of this version though. I was so engrossed in it that I thought the MC will be meeting his gf in update. Hope these changes continue in the upcoming updates.

Good start. Pretty much decent renders and nice story. One problem I found was after MC reached his friend's house, he is clean shaved but in some renders he has beard. Hoping dev will fix this. For now this ia kinetic novel with absolute no choices. You can name the MC that's all. Even though it's kinetical I liked the story and characters. Game got some sound effects like gun shots like you hear in action games. Got some music too. MC didn't met the blonde girl in the banner. Seems like she will appear on the game on the next update.

If you don't like kinetic novel don't play it. Don't know whether dev will add choices in the next update. I didn't played his other game because nowadays sandbox is not my cup of tea. If you like kinetic novel with nice story play it. Hoping dev will continue this project. Looking forward to next updates

Good game with solid story and renders.
Unfortunately sex without the player consent is a no go for me. If in a porn game the player can't decide who the MC has sex with, I see no point in playing.

Thank you and the best of luck.

Version: v0.05