VN - Ren'Py - Reika Mission [Ch.0] [Chunchunmaru]

So far not that bad. However there is tons of clipping during animated scenes and there's not that much content and 90% of it has no audio or sex talk...needs some work to be a lot better and become very good.

In the past, the main issue with most NTR games was that they would simply copy-paste clichés, allowing the player to predict everything; it became so repetitive that the enjoyment diminished day by day.

This developer has ripped off another game 100%; I mean, they have gone far beyond just copying clichés. They have completely cloned a well-known, abandoned game—the dialogue, the progression, the scenes, the story, the drug plot device to kickstart the NTR, and even the card game. I can't believe someone would do this and then say, "Support me"!!!!

Other issues: The art is weak; it looks dated, like something from years ago. Another problem is that it isn't a game, it's a visual novel—the player can't do a damn thing. Then there are the numerous visual bugs; for instance, on the camera, you see the wife holding the phone talking to the husband, but when the MC calls her, she doesn't pick up. There are grammar issues too, and so on.

I can't believe people's standards have dropped so low that they are giving a 5 out of 5 rating to a carbon copy. At the very least, they could have mentioned who they copied this work from; they didn't even do that and passed it off as their own!!!!!

Played the game and I liked it so far. Gameplay, art design, and other aspect looks promising so far.
Specially considering this is the first attempt by the developer. Some dialogues and scenes are repeated multiple times early on.
I understood the purpose of the repetation but maybe the developer can limit that to two repetation? One with blurry camera, one without.
That's the only improvement I can think of. Everything else was spot on. Great job.

I take it it's a "remake" in a way of Navigating the Rift and it basically takes a lot from it. As far as this Ch0 goes, it manages to actually go beyond where the other game got (for example, multiple sexual intercourses) but in doing so it skips over a lot of the corruption and scenes that took the other game there (like all the kissing scenes). So if the other game's plot was already thin, in this one it makes no real sense. It also keeps a lot of the mistakes when it comes to "gameplay", like forcing three day repeats for no particular reason, or the lack of plotline sense in us seeing what's happening and yet the MC has no clue while we use his "gf tracker" which he seems like he should have access to.

The art direction in this one I don't particularly like too much. I rather have the original kind of look, and Reika is way too physically exagerated. Animations are decent but too brief and basic and sometimes they bug out and turn green and pixelated on their first runs. And it seems to have the same boring sounds as the original.

So, all in all, though I applaud the effort to revive a game that was abandoned and give it your own spin, I don't think it actually succeeds in it too well, and the plot advances so fast that I wonder what can happen when we get to Ch 1 or 2 and everything has already been done a dozen times.

This one is interesting, because it constantly fluctuates between “masterpiece” and “pretty average.” From what I gather this is a new dev, and the intent is to make a series of short NTR titles, so I am judging it within that style rather than expecting a slowburn.

This is obviously not a slowburn. It moves very fast. Slowburn is usually the gold standard for this genre, but not every game needs to be one. Sometimes a quick dopamine hit is exactly what you want, and this game delivers. The scenes are hot. Reika is hot. I personally fall into the “wish her breasts were a bit smaller” camp, but it is not a complaint. I like big and small, and she looks great overall. My only hope for future entries is variation in body types and in the type of bull, otherwise the formula could start to feel repetitive over multiple short games.

As far as short NTR games go, this one does a lot right. The sex scenes are genuinely hot, and I loved the hidden NTR moments. Blurred silhouettes, glimpses through curtains, seeing the act but not quite seeing it. The MC trying to understand what is happening while his girlfriend or wife is getting taken. That is peak NTR and I wish more games used it.

The sound design is also excellent. Some of the best I have heard in games like this.

Where things could improve. The animation quality swings between amazing and a little janky. When it hits, it really hits. It reminds me a bit of an amateur DeliriumBear. The latest scene also had the audio cut off after a single plap and then stay silent for the next two minutes. That kills the momentum. Consistency is the main thing that needs attention.

Writing-wise, I did not love how quickly Reika turned into a total nepho. It was hinted that she has a high sex drive, but the shift still felt sudden. Even in a fast paced short game, keeping her conflicted a little longer would make the payoff stronger. The first few scenes and trips to the new planet were the peak of the game. Things after that were still good, just not as strong.

Overall, this is a very solid start, especially for a new developer. The talent is obvious. The animations can be great, the sound design is already top tier, and the short story format absolutely works as long as the writing stays consistent. With a bit more polish, this could turn into a real gem. I can easily see future releases with new characters, new variations of men to steal the heroine, and more refined writing and animation becoming genuinely amazing.

So yes. Great work. Keep going. You are on the right track.

I love this game so far, yes the ntr rate was too fast but aside from the body portion and the sound affects. The animation was the best in my view in terms of the movement, its definitely perfect. I hope the dev can continue with the same person, and not adding multiple people, men in this case. I also hope that the mc also gets involved with a big tits beauty (rival to the main heroine).

There are no choices, no gameplay, just read and click. The renders aren't bad and there are decent animation loops, but the story leaves a lot to be desired. Even for a paper-thin plot, the corruption of a 'faithful' wife is so steep it makes you wonder why they're written to be faithful in the first place.
I'm trying not to be too harsh for a first entry, but there just isn't a lot of substance here, and there doesn't seem to be a lot of room for the story to continue in a meaningful way. It went right from "I would never cheat" to in something like four days.
In the end, it's a very short cheating fantasy in a sci-fi world, with MTL that occasionally turns to poetry. Right now, it's completely forgettable.

This game is great it might be fast ntr right away but I still loved the pace the animation are not bad I'm grateful for developer adding animation to there game I just wish the game has some type of sex sounds or moaning from wife this game is fast paced ntr developer doesn't hold anything back and I thank them for that the graphics are decent I didn't run into any problems or major bugs at that matter thank you for making a great ntr game it's spicy hot

Good new NTR games are rare nowadays. There's plenty of them being released but most of them don't fit my taste. This one though... it hits. I'm looking forward to seeing your future works. You've got it!!

Only one chapter has been released, but this game is already the best I've played (at least this year). The Art are very juicy, the main character is hot and thick. The plot may seem typical of NTR, but what's wrong with that? Everything is simple, there are no walls of text that I dislike, you just enjoy the game.

The female MC is nice looking, body is erotic too and the scenes are definitely can be improved but tbh for me it's already good. Although I wish for a more slowed down pace or corruption building but the author already said that it was tweaked and be improved in the future updates. This game has a potential so yeah 5/5 for me.

Good demo needs sounds though the animation style is nice and hopefully this turns into a really good and decently long game. Can't wait to see more updates hopefully with music for background noise and added noises for te H animations.