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VN Ren'Py Reika Mission [Ch.0] [Chunchunmaru]

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The boobs

  • stay like this

    Votes: 122 57.5%

  • please make it smaller

    Votes: 90 42.5%
  • Total voters
    212
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YatoSensei

YatoSensei

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ChunchunmaruDev said:
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First of all: Based.

Second. A LOT of potential here. I really like how the Female MC looks (it's too rare that we get a properly thick/voluptous female MC that doesn't look like a balloon). The animations seem pretty good as well - decently long but not too much.

I do have critiques and these are all just for improvement for you Mr. Dev.

Lets start off with the story. The premise is good, I like it. But the jump into sex is WAAAAY too fast. People enjoy a slow-burn story, where the Female MC gets slowly tempted or blackmailed or gaslight into doing acts with the Male Antagonist. Start off with gropes and touches while clothed, then some stripping down and more gropes - then things escalate to handjobs and so on. Things gotta progress slow to keep things interesting.


The scenes themselves are fine but I'd like to think the male POV could be a bit more blurry or obscurred? Maybe start off the scenes with the pixelization of the view already being on instead of already things being uncovered? I think that would help with letting people's imaginations run wild from the start of the scene.

Good luck to you though, I would love to see this game prosper and future projects to also improve! (y)
 
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YatoSensei said:
First of all: Based.

Second. A LOT of potential here. I really like how the Female MC looks (it's too rare that we get a properly thick/voluptous female MC that doesn't look like a balloon). The animations seem pretty good as well - decently long but not too much.

I do have critiques and these are all just for improvement for you Mr. Dev.

Lets start off with the story. The premise is good, I like it. But the jump into sex is WAAAAY too fast. People enjoy a slow-burn story, where the Female MC gets slowly tempted or blackmailed or gaslight into doing acts with the Male Antagonist. Start off with gropes and touches while clothed, then some stripping down and more gropes - then things escalate to handjobs and so on. Things gotta progress slow to keep things interesting.


The scenes themselves are fine but I'd like to think the male POV could be a bit more blurry or obscurred? Maybe start off the scenes with the pixelization of the view already being on instead of already things being uncovered? I think that would help with letting people's imaginations run wild from the start of the scene.

Good luck to you though, I would love to see this game prosper and future projects to also improve! (y)
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This! Dev please do some slow burn it would really upgrade the NTR to whole new level
 
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Erick101

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YatoSensei said:
First of all: Based.

Second. A LOT of potential here. I really like how the Female MC looks (it's too rare that we get a properly thick/voluptous female MC that doesn't look like a balloon). The animations seem pretty good as well - decently long but not too much.

I do have critiques and these are all just for improvement for you Mr. Dev.

Lets start off with the story. The premise is good, I like it. But the jump into sex is WAAAAY too fast. People enjoy a slow-burn story, where the Female MC gets slowly tempted or blackmailed or gaslight into doing acts with the Male Antagonist. Start off with gropes and touches while clothed, then some stripping down and more gropes - then things escalate to handjobs and so on. Things gotta progress slow to keep things interesting.


The scenes themselves are fine but I'd like to think the male POV could be a bit more blurry or obscurred? Maybe start off the scenes with the pixelization of the view already being on instead of already things being uncovered? I think that would help with letting people's imaginations run wild from the start of the scene.

Good luck to you though, I would love to see this game prosper and future projects to also improve! (y)
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Stfu id rather go for the blow rather than slow he can have many sex variations as the dev wants rather than just bj, hj, tj and fj its like playing fucking your hand. This happens on so many corngames nowadays i say its a good move for the dev than just to wait half a year or a year for a penetration
 
YatoSensei

YatoSensei

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Erick101 said:
Stfu id rather go for the blow rather than slow he can have many sex variations as the dev wants rather than just bj, hj, tj and fj its like playing fucking your hand. This happens on so many corngames nowadays i say its a good move for the dev than just to wait half a year or a year for a penetration
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Calm down mate, just wanted to leave some feedback on how I feel about the game. If you don't like my reply, then dislike it but don't go crazy about it.
 
ChunchunmaruDev

ChunchunmaruDev

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YatoSensei said:
First of all: Based.

Second. A LOT of potential here. I really like how the Female MC looks (it's too rare that we get a properly thick/voluptous female MC that doesn't look like a balloon). The animations seem pretty good as well - decently long but not too much.

I do have critiques and these are all just for improvement for you Mr. Dev.

Lets start off with the story. The premise is good, I like it. But the jump into sex is WAAAAY too fast. People enjoy a slow-burn story, where the Female MC gets slowly tempted or blackmailed or gaslight into doing acts with the Male Antagonist. Start off with gropes and touches while clothed, then some stripping down and more gropes - then things escalate to handjobs and so on. Things gotta progress slow to keep things interesting.


The scenes themselves are fine but I'd like to think the male POV could be a bit more blurry or obscurred? Maybe start off the scenes with the pixelization of the view already being on instead of already things being uncovered? I think that would help with letting people's imaginations run wild from the start of the scene.

Good luck to you though, I would love to see this game prosper and future projects to also improve! (y)
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I created chapter 0, which is the initial plot of the story, and will completely remake chapter 1. I'm gathering all the input, including a slow burn but with a lot of animation variations.

So wait for the release date and I ask for further feedback after that!

Thank you very much for your input!..
 
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Great release especially if you consider how much content was produced in a matter of a few weeks for this. Dev is cooking.

Hope for some POV scenes as well. Need to see that Reika BJ face.
 
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