VN - Ren'Py - Rememberless [v0.3] [Clausdesska]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    L3z1l3

    - The renders are average at best. There are some images with women having grey sclera.
    - The story doesn't make any sense. The story starts somewhere in the middle. Nothing is shown, nothing is explained. Things happen that make no sense and you are just left behind wondering WTH that was.
    - Dialogue is bad. Some untranslated words or just feeling unnatural.
    - Part of the UI is not even translated. Music volume setting is bugged.
    - There is barely any content
    - No sex scene, even though dialogue suggests that MC got a handjob from one of the characters prior to start of the game and had sex with another, which could have been used for early sex scenes but none of those are in the game.
    - Pointless sandbox part. I don't mind sandbox games, but boy was this sandbox scene absolutely useless. It seemed more like dev experimenting with the coding.

    MC-s life changing revelation mentioned by the dev in the description should be shown and not just mentioned outside of the game.
    Dialogue and existing scenes should be rewritten and extended for it to make any sense.
    Sandbox should be either removed or made meaningful.
    I liked the planned tags and how the game was described by the dev but at it's current state it not worth even a look. I hope dev can fix things up at this early stage otherwise it's just a waste of time.

    Update for v0.3:
    UI is still partially untranslated
    Some dialogue is still untranslated
    Beginning of the game is still a mess
    The pointless sandbox event mentioned earlier is still there
    Later sandbox event is not much better either because it's completely linear
    Lot of dialogue choices don't do anything in the background. The few that do are not necessarily the logical choice and don't give you immediate feedback so you can easily miss things. Will need a WT later on.
    Some of the females in the game are quite hot if you are ok with physics defying breasts but nowhere near the best AVNs on the site.
    Animation is not very good but at least it's there.
    The personality of the females is interesting. Especially Zoey, Robyn and Avery have potential.

    Added 1 star because at least it has some more content, though it took over a year to get here so I don't see much chance for it ever to be completed.