Requesting Feedback on a Story I'm working on

[Render Rookie]

If this isn't the right place to post this, I apologize. I'm working on a visual story and was hoping to get some feedback on it. It is about a post zombie apocalypse world where a young man finds that he may be the cure for the zombie virus. Delivering the cure to the infected will make for some interesting situations. To make matters worse, the cure comes with a catch, but I don't want to give that away yet.

Here is what I have so far.

 

[Nightwing1966]

If this isn't the right place to post this, I apologize. I'm working on a visual story and was hoping to get some feedback on it. It is about a post zombie apocalypse world where a young man finds that he may be the cure for the zombie virus. Delivering the cure to the infected will make for some interesting situations. To make matters worse, the cure comes with a catch, but I don't want to give that away yet.

Here is what I have so far.

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Amazing story so far! I eagerly look forward to what more you are going to make.

 

[Render Rookie]

Amazing story so far! I eagerly look forward to what more you are going to make.

Thank you Nightwing1966! I was starting to think it was a flop as my post got several views, but no feedback. I was about the shelf the idea, but if you like it, I'll push on with the next part.

 

[Nightwing1966]

Thank you Nightwing1966! I was starting to think it was a flop as my post got several views, but no feedback. I was about the shelf the idea, but if you like it, I'll push on with the next part.

I most definitely like it! I have enjoyed all your renders since you started here and I hope you go on for a long time. Your style is really talking to me.

 

[Arabi1]

Pretty good, I wonder what would happen next.

 

[bxIvan]

Amazing story so far! I eagerly look forward to what more you are going to make.

area 51 lab, nice work on the story easy to follow and be careful of jump around. we are at the lab and escape zombie, you could have a TV showing whats going on in society.this lets the read know. that due to the escaped zombie society has collapsed and some quick back story between these characters.