This is the update from my original review from May of 2020
PROS
The story is interesting
Characters are dynamic
Renders are good
CONS
Writing needs some help
Tiddies are lopsided a lot
Summary
The story is pretty interesting. You've got this big mystery going on, and then you have all of these smaller issues orbiting around the main plot. It is both interesting and frustrating at the same time. It pulls you in, spins you around and leaves you wanting more.
The characters are dynamic and all have their own things going on. I just wish you had more choices to really assert the dominance you're lead to believe you have.
The issues with the writing are sporadic and mostly consist of misspellings and other typos. Nothing that really takes away from the story, but they are noticeable.
I will recommend this VN. Karabinek is doing pretty good work with this story and even though it's been almost 2 and a half years, there is enough content in the 12 in game days to keep you interested and leaves you waiting for the next update.
PROS
The story is interesting
Characters are dynamic
Renders are good
CONS
Writing needs some help
Tiddies are lopsided a lot
Summary
The story is pretty interesting. You've got this big mystery going on, and then you have all of these smaller issues orbiting around the main plot. It is both interesting and frustrating at the same time. It pulls you in, spins you around and leaves you wanting more.
The characters are dynamic and all have their own things going on. I just wish you had more choices to really assert the dominance you're lead to believe you have.
The issues with the writing are sporadic and mostly consist of misspellings and other typos. Nothing that really takes away from the story, but they are noticeable.
I will recommend this VN. Karabinek is doing pretty good work with this story and even though it's been almost 2 and a half years, there is enough content in the 12 in game days to keep you interested and leaves you waiting for the next update.