"Ever since I saw you for the first time,
I can't get you out of my head"
(they've met yesterday)
⠀⠀Alright, why is there a smoking toggle at the beginning? No way it's because there was some kind of public outrage in regards to presence of cigarettes,
right? It just seems so silly to me.
⠀⠀How do you know a VN is made by an amateur? Right at the start a choice that leads to an
immediate gameover -
a classic.
⠀⠀Every woman has the same body type of a supermodel and zero skin imperfections. It's nigh impossible to approximate their age by observation, 20 y/o and 40 y/o look almost identical. Everyone has big tits. Look, I love my ample bosoms as much as the next guy, but the golden rule still applies -
you gotta strike the balance, otherwise there will be
no novelty or excitement.
⠀⠀If we're talking about how well they're written, well, most of them fall for MC at the first sight, as if he cast some attraction spell, so
probably not that well. Some even have a bipolar disorder as it seems. One moment they say or think one thing and next they enact the exact opposite. There are
30+ love interests in total and author has no time to develop most of them any further that initial impressions, so what happens is they know each ofther for couple of days (some even less than that) and already swear eternal love and loyalty to each other.
⠀⠀MC is a Gary Stue. He's already wealthy, well-connected, stronger than Bruce Lee, fights like an MMA champion and has two girlfriends by default. He can do no wrond, everything goes his way and he irradiates alpha male hormones that women just cannot resist. He's also basically the only man in the region, all other men exist solely as his punching bags.
⠀⠀The main plot is kinda stupid and mainly serves as an excuse to meet new girls, but it's at least entertaining. And the dialogue while often serviceable, sometimes is something else, really. Tommy Wiseau would be proud.
⠀⠀MC hastily runs away from his home and family because his father's girlfriend threatened to accuse him of killing his friend?
Really? She's literally got no proof! That's not how it works!
⠀⠀MC explains in detail why he left home to different characters
at least 5 times. He and other characters also recite recent events to each other all the damn time. Especially in MC's head. I'm tired to sit there and go through him reiterating the same thought over and over. Are we ramping up word count or the author is just that oblivious? There is generally way too much yapping, including topics totally unrelated to any of the girls, which does seem like
intentional padding.
⠀⠀The evil human trafficking syndicate couldn't find MC with all their spies and connections for almost 2 weeks, but a pair of journalists that came from another town found him almost instantly without an effort.
⠀⠀Anyways, I can keep going with examples all day long, but suffice to say
the writing in this novel is subpar. Hardly anything seems believable and most answers raise even more questions.
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Game is completely silent. Not even royalty-free library main menu theme.
⠀⠀Animations are suparare and even then they're either
poorly made (extremely slow, jerky loop and lack amplitude) or are
store bought assets. Sex scenes are alright. What I find annoying is that everyone completely undresses everytime before intercourse. There is light SM dynamic with a couple of characters but otherwise
there is no spice in the sex.
⠀⠀Renders are mostly ok,
mostly. Sometimes they are
poorly compressed and
show artifacts, other times
the scenes are so dim, you'd have to turn up your gamma to see anything (I did download the "low quality" version, but it's still unacceptable). Often
backgrounds lack props/fidelity. Sometimes image on the screen does not match text description.
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Dumbed down to the absolute low binary choice system: it's either + point / nothing changes, pursue / end relationship, or cum inside / outside. And that's it, that's all you get to choose from. Author couldn't come up with anything better, than making you choose to complement women's looks everytime they meet to increase their affection, it seems like you get 80% of "love points" with girls by simply saying
"You're beautiful", if only it was that simple irl.
⠀⠀This VN is very similar in nature to some other ones, the names of which I cannot mention because of a stupid review policy on this forum. Let's say the one where
you take the role of a rising basketball player, or the one where
you live with your grandmother to name a few. So if you're a fan of those, then this title will be right up your alley. I'd probably rate this a 3 for decent porn and power fantasy,
but as development went on, writing detereorated quickly. I mean the bar wasn't high to begin with, but now it really sank below what is acceptable -
a mixture of excruciatingly boring and embarrassingly bad.