Art 10/10: Beautiful stylised renders with some looping animations, atmospheric effects, and use of soft pans and zooms on still scenes.
Story 5/10: Doesn't give its own premise any depth and it's already very tropey without seeming to realise it. It doesn't always sync well with the visuals and clearly hasn't been spell-checked... I get the impression that the story was rushed after the renders for the demo were complete, so it could still recover if they give it more attention.
Sound 2/10: There's different music in every single scene, with the volume cranked to 11, even where it's totally unsuitable. It really just ruins the atmosphere... In my opinion only one scene in the Demo should have music; the Club. And its VIP room should use the -same- track but muted or dampened. Every other scene would be better with soft ambient street noises or dock/industrial noises respectively.