Short Review of Ch.1 Version
Pros:
- Story (While still in it's first steps, seems interesting)
- Renders (Nice enough, but don't expect Masterworks)
Cons:
- The English (It's very, very bad)
- The Spanish (No es tan malo, pero tiene muchos erros) (Not as bad, but it has many errors)
- The Text Font (As a simple rule, use Serif fonts (Like THIS, THIS or THIS) for on paper publications, and Sans-Serif ones (Like what we are using) for screen.
- The disabling of the "A" shortcut in Ren'Py that would allow us to choose a better font. NEVER do this, dyslexic people and people with certain eyesight issues depend on those settings to enjoy your game. Unnecessary and very offensive move there.
- Excessive large text also true for excessive small. Accessibility is very IMPORTANT.
- The joint effect of bad English/Spanish, text font and text size, makes it very hard to read in comfort. You constantly feel that the text is trying to fight you.
- Choices with only ONE option. Like Maya or Ava. Pointless.
Conclusion:
The project is still quite new, needs some heavy review of both the Spanish text and the English Translation. Needs some adjusting of the Text issues. Author seems to think that the text is some form of graphic, forgetting that it's main purpose is to be READ. By all.
Rating: 2/5 - Liked the story, everything else needs revision.
Due to the possible/maybe/potential inclusion of NTR in this game, I would recommend to not invest much in it, if you don't like it. Best Option: Wait until the Author makes up his mind.
Pros:
- Story (While still in it's first steps, seems interesting)
- Renders (Nice enough, but don't expect Masterworks)
Cons:
- The English (It's very, very bad)
- The Spanish (No es tan malo, pero tiene muchos erros) (Not as bad, but it has many errors)
- The Text Font (As a simple rule, use Serif fonts (Like THIS, THIS or THIS) for on paper publications, and Sans-Serif ones (Like what we are using) for screen.
- The disabling of the "A" shortcut in Ren'Py that would allow us to choose a better font. NEVER do this, dyslexic people and people with certain eyesight issues depend on those settings to enjoy your game. Unnecessary and very offensive move there.
- Excessive large text also true for excessive small. Accessibility is very IMPORTANT.
- The joint effect of bad English/Spanish, text font and text size, makes it very hard to read in comfort. You constantly feel that the text is trying to fight you.
- Choices with only ONE option. Like Maya or Ava. Pointless.
Conclusion:
The project is still quite new, needs some heavy review of both the Spanish text and the English Translation. Needs some adjusting of the Text issues. Author seems to think that the text is some form of graphic, forgetting that it's main purpose is to be READ. By all.
Rating: 2/5 - Liked the story, everything else needs revision.
Due to the possible/maybe/potential inclusion of NTR in this game, I would recommend to not invest much in it, if you don't like it. Best Option: Wait until the Author makes up his mind.
