VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Ripples of Temptation and Consequence [v0.01] [P&C Games]

Most other reviews are positive, I do like the Graphics and the fact that someone is actually using woman of color in one of these stories. I hope that the wife's mother and Aunt show up in again.

I guess the only disappointment was not seeing more of the students.

A slog. Amateur writing, indulgent setup, dumb choices. As it is, there are no "cons" to the main character's affliction in Pros and Cons. He can fuck amazingly, everyone loves it, he never gets in trouble, etc.. There are no stakes! The player should be weighing options, deciding if they should let their lust control them or not. Reading the synopsis one would think it would lead to well-made choices. This is not the case. The player very directly chooses which scenes they will see. Every other choice than that is a non-choice.
We know every character's every thought. To hell with suspense, apparently.
Sure, the player could skip past the dialogue to see the scenes, but what's the point of using the Visual Novel medium if you don't use it?

Finished v0.01 because it deserves to be judged as a whole. If not for that I wouldn't have gotten past the second scene. Skip it.

Gameplay : ✭✭✭✭✭
Story : ✭✭✭✭✭
Spelling : ✭✭✭✭✭
renders : ✭✭✭✭✰
Potential : ✭✭✭✭✰
Overall : ✭✭✭✭✭
Girls physique : ✭✭✭✭✰
Graphic : ✭✭✭✭✰
Creativity :✭✭✭✭✭

over all 4.8 ,
it was a bit unexpected a real gem.

Love this game. I love black ladys, they are super gorgeous. One small suggestion is that everything seems to be quite quick and easy. The content of the story is nothing special. Hopefully Dev can build a more in-depth storyline. Or you can add sound effects between sex scenes. It would be great to see her pregnant. Can't wait to see MC seduces his 3 daughters. Great job, keep going.

Great amount of content for a 0.01 release! Renders look good, there's variety among the characters' body types and looks, dialogues are written well; neither too few nor too pointless/meaningless choices.
Altogether really looking forward to future releases. Great job, dev!

Freaking loved it! Great start for a VN, lot's of content and a very hot cast of girls! I'll be eagerly awaiting each and every update! I hope that this will be continued all the way to the end I hate getting hooked on projects so early in their lives. I have faith P&C Games I'll bee eagerly watching all your games.

TL;DR: It's a primitive and mediocre porn game. If you want something more, look elsewhere.

Models are outdated, and only few of them seem kinda appealing. Renders are of passable quality, but just 1280*720 pixels. Animations are primitive.

The story has a very strong porn reek. There's no such medical condition in the real world (10 times increased sperm production etc.?), so it's hard to identify with MC. Dialogs are just condensed porn talk.

I would give it 1 or 2 stars, but the MC and some other characters are so dedicated to sex that it's hot sometimes. I guess not every game should be veritable and artistic, so I'll rate it as a porn game. Hence 3 stars.

[0.01]

v0.01.
Very strong start, good renders and very sexy models. If you like a good mix of curvacious and more petite body types, you'll enjoy this. The incest and harem tags are a BIG part of the game from the get go. I also enjoyed that the MC has the goods to justify a whole group of women (related to eachother) happily sharing him.
Also, its about time we get a game with this many black and mixed race girls. Mixed with a hugely endowed MC, it ticks alot of my boxes. So far however this is no raceplay involved, which suits me fine.
As for future updates I have a couple of ideas for the dev, if they ever read these reviews.
1, if the MC is gonna mix his family with Francesca's, it would be great to lean into how much more open and sexual the MC's family is. Play with that contrast, and I think you have a good premise for a lot of sexual tension.
2, don't add to many characters. We have four girls in the MC's family, and four more will come to it, plus Dakota. That's already almost 10 girls. Focus on that core group and don't spread the pool too thin.
3, add a few smooth animations in the sex scenes if possible (don't know much abour hardware).

All and all, it's a very strong start that plays into a very set number of kinks, and I'm looking forward to the next update

For an intro it has some meat on the bones.
Although it starts off as the cliche teacher banging students, it quickly unfolds into something different.
Good
Models are not the recycled ones from every other VN out there
MC is over 18, and actually looks like a man
Story is smooth and interesting.
Bad
Several writing issues( double use of words, and in places that they shouldn't be located)
The backstory with the wife was cut way to soon.
Over all
This story has a pretty decent flow. You get some back ground mixed into the intro. It isn't over powering, but it does leave you wishing for more. Which is not usually how you feel when getting back ground on characters.
Writing is overall not bad. There are several mishaps here and there. Not over bearing with the flow of the story telling.
The models are all different. I don't think I've seen them used in other VNs, but I haven't seen every VN here.
The MC looks a lot like John Cena( it's quite hilarious) but refreshing that he doesn't look like a 12 yr old masking as an adult.
I honestly recommend this VN. It seems like it's going to be one hell of a rollercoaster of a ride.
Good luck to the dev(s) and hopefully we won't have to wait for months at a time to get updates, or that it gets abandoned after a few updates.