VN - Ren'Py - Rise From The Ashes [Ch.1 Bugfix] [Sihirbaz_arttzz]

Graphs look great, as good as hs visuals can get or close to it, thats the only reason I dont give it a 1 star.

The rest is bad, cliche garbage. The MC is supposed to start as a loser, yet every female he comes across is instantly into him, no matter how pathetic he acts, they still want him. ??????????? You want him to be a loser or not bro?

The characters are very basic, got nothing going for them outside of their looks, and we got LIs giving handjobs to other characters, with MC watching of course, because he is a loser and taht means he is also a cuck who likes to watch? I dont know whats the logic there, but I closed the game when the MC gets treated like a retard by the whore, and for no fucking reason he ends up getting a handjob, inmediatly after she got finished with the other man.
I dont know if they plan to make this a sharing/ntr game, but if thats not their intention then I dont know why they would include such an off putting scene like that, but it is peak retardation regardless of their intention, after that I just have no hope for the writing to get better.

renders5/5 for HS standards
characters 1/5
writing 1/5
dialogs 2/5

The story is bit cliche but looks very promising really like . Felling a little anoxius about a dev working on multiple proyects but gonna trust this dev hope this game makes it to end because has potential

Characters look amazing, though the render quality and lighting is not always the best.
Story is cliche but not terrible.
The one scene in chapter 1 was decent, but a little dull.
Hoping future chapters improve on some of the weak points, but I recommend this avn.

Maybe the "all the girls end up attracted to the MC" is a bit cliché, but I like that there are girls who treats him well and girls who don't care (at least for now) about him. The fact that the MC is also ready to start changing his life is also a great start.

I understand that being the introduction there's not much sex content but still there are a few "touches" (pun intented) so don't rush. And the visuals are also quite pretty

Overall I liked it, and good luck to the author following this game