3D-Daz Roast my renders and make me a better artist

[TheExordick]

Hey good people,

as i'm currently fed up with Unreal Engine, i decided to dive deeper in the DAZ world.
i'm currently building some airline stewardess/hostess scenes and i would really appreciate your critiques on my images.

i'm in the early stages so the scenes are a bit empty but i feel there is room for improvement before i add the details.



The clipping!!!!!

 

[defm64]

Seems pretty decent to me.

 

[AgentOrange]

Maybe add some passengers, otherwise why is she pushing the serving cart ?

 

[TheExordick]

Seems pretty decent to me.

thanks! i'm looking for any kind of feedback: composition, color balancing, exposure, contrast?

Maybe add some passengers, otherwise why is she pushing the serving cart ?

That's the next step! i'm preparing a mix of faceless mannequins and some fully fledged people to have some passengers.
The idea is to have some of them she interacts with and some that are only background, but i dont' know if this makes a mess and it is just better to place few strategic passenger and call it the day.

here's a daylight shot:


i really need to fix the panty clipping!

 

[defm64]

thanks! i'm looking for any kind of feedback: composition, color balancing, exposure, contrast?

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here's a daylight shot:
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i really need to fix the panty clipping!

Other people here who are much more skilled with DAZ/3D renders than I am will be able to give you more useful feedback, but I really don't see any problematic aspects regarding contrast or other elements in your scenes. This clipping issue can easily go unnoticed by most people, so I don't think it's a big deal.

 

[TheExordick]

let's get a bit spicy. Anyone?

 

[TheExordick]

This could be the start menu background.

is the luggage floating?

 

[HeelsMaiden]

Are you going to develop these into a full project?

 

[TheExordick]

Are you going to develop these into a full project?

I'm thinking about it, yes. I've also laid out the a very rudimentary lore and gameplay loop idea.

I only have two problems with it:
- i never used Renpy (which is a marginal problems, but still)
- i am a very bad writer: so story, dialogues, character diversification and all those narrative things that make a VN so good are not going to happen. At least not from my person.

so what i'm thinking is a sandbox gameloop where you control this young flight attendant and get harassed all day long. The better the plane/class (economy, business, first, private jet, stuff like that) you are working in the more depraved the customer becomes and you need to endure or embrace the experience.

I like games where sex is a game mechanic and not just side dish.
I feel this would have potential but i need to do much more design before going balls deep into this project.

Also, i'm still trying to understand how good DAZ can render, because i like good quality work.

 

[TheExordick]

Ma'am, I think one of my earpods fell below the seat, could you help me please?

 

[HeelsMaiden]

I'm thinking about it, yes. I've also laid out the a very rudimentary lore and gameplay loop idea.

I only have two problems with it:
- i never used Renpy (which is a marginal problems, but still)
- i am a very bad writer: so story, dialogues, character diversification and all those narrative things that make a VN so good are not going to happen. At least not from my person.

so what i'm thinking is a sandbox gameloop where you control this young flight attendant and get harassed all day long. The better the plane/class (economy, business, first, private jet, stuff like that) you are working in the more depraved the customer becomes and you need to endure or embrace the experience.

I like games where sex is a game mechanic and not just side dish.
I feel this would have potential but i need to do much more design before going balls deep into this project.

Also, i'm still trying to understand how good DAZ can render, because i like good quality work.

Nice, I've been looking for a FMC flight attendant game/vn for so long to satisfy my flight attendant fetish but damn they're almost non-existent lol. So I really hope your project can be realized. Unfortunately, I can't help you with the technical things as I have zero experience with them. The pictures overall look good enough already to me though.

 

[TheExordick]

Nice, I've been looking for a FMC flight attendant game/vn for so long to satisfy my flight attendant fetish but damn they're almost non-existent lol. So I really hope your project can be realized. Unfortunately, I can't help you with the technical things as I have zero experience with them. The pictures overall look good enough already to me though.

In fact, i fly a lot for work and recently i tought that i never palyed a game with flight attendants and i have never seen a game with a flight attendant as protagonist. Which is a bit interesting, since i believe there are a lot of people with these kind of fantasies.
So, since my UE5 project went tits up recently, i decided to take a break from UE and embrace a new adventure.

 

[TheExordick]

Posing DAZ characters is really annoying... but a bit of tweaking is necessary in my opinion.

 

[TheExordick]

Smack!