VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Routine Checkup [v1.0] [deadbeat]

Well very funny but too short game, at least has very nice graphics and nice sexscene. I was expecting that main character had fallen a sleep but plot decided to surprise.

Overall better approach this w/o any expectations since either likes this or doesn't like this.

Story- Solid short focused VN, the equivalent of a great adult short story
Originality- Basically a plot pulled right out of a porn movie
Art- Good render
Mechanics- Straightforward VN
Animations- Smooth and sexy
Amount of content- Not much, but that can be a good thing when it’s as focused as this
Subjective stuff- No incest, which is a plus.

Routine Checkup [v1.0] [deadbeat] was an incredible start for a first game! The renders and animations are of top-notch quality with a story that is, of course, going to be the most realistic with going to the doctors. Don't try this at home, but an incredible short experience!

Short and concise, but a great game nonetheless.
The only thing I can point out are the animations being half of it the actual animation and then the other half the same but rewinded, the lack of sex talk, and a few grammar mistakes. You can also point out Alice's facial expressions being weird if you want to put it like that, but imo, it gives her kind of an exotic touch.
Aside from that, it's a killer game, and totally recommended!

Short but great game. Alice looks wonderful and is very eye catching. Some of the facial expressions are a bit weird. Dialog was pretty well written.
Hope to see this expanded on. Maybe a second game with more Alice and definitely some Dr. Butler )

Clean renders. Beautiful girl however, the ass looks very boney when she bends over which could be far from true when we see her in all her voluptuousness. Her model is unique from any I've seen before - always a blessing when a character looks original.
Animations weren't natural at all. Loops weren't seamless also. As such the sex felt plastic.

Superb dialogue; it's light natured conversation worked for the VN being short. Very endearing female character too.

A lot of choices that influence when the game ends. If you want to see as much out of the VN, you're gonna have to rollback/have save points.

Well...

Amazing and sexy af.

For once models are different, animations good. Some lags on fast speed while sexing.

Can't wait to see other games from you.

Please I hope you will update Off The Record berry soon.

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For me it's a "business card" game/demo where the creator shows us what he can do and it's really good.

About 20 minutes to test all the possibilities. Enough time to have a good time between two big games. Very good graphics even if the lady's smile is curious and the whole is animated what more could you ask for.

Through this one, I'm closely following his new game and until then, I recommend this demo. And since criticism is easier than practice, I would like to thank and congratulate Deadbeat for his work.


Signed Jack Beauregard

This was short but for the first game it was excellent and the renders and animations quite good. The last possible scene (I guess was the anal one) position wise was not my style. Doggy style would have been better. I really would like an Addon with the ebony doctor as well. Ebony characters are rare and I really like, how you made her.

Really enjoyed it. The girl's model is unique and well made. Face expressions are not very realistic sometimes, but show a lot of emotions.
The story is also pretty good, but very short.
Looking forward for next games from the author.

It's really short game but extremely well made! Please support the developer.
The only thing that I think can be improve are the facial expressions but not completely necessary, the game is as good as it gets

Short, but fun, multiple possibilities. Decent animations, even though the mimics during the initial dialogue are a bit too pronounced for my tastes. Character model of the doc (Alice) ticks all the boxes for me too.

This is a very short game but I have to say that the renders and animations are above average. I think it took me all of 10 minutes to finish and it's just what it says. There's no real story or character development to speak of. The MC is going to see a hot doctor and has to make some smart choices if he wants more than a check-up.

The animations are very good...I think there's one animation that was a bit strange (missionary with the face view...her breasts did not move normally). But a solid effort.

Hopefully, this dev can either write a story or find someone with a story idea to help them...because there's some definite potential here as the graphics and animations (mostly) are very good.

Graphics - 8/10
Animations - 8/10
Story - 2/10
Characters - 2/10
Fun - 8/10