First of all, the translation needs a lot of work. It is especially bad in the first scenes on the train and on the street. Usually I don't mind poor grammar on VNs here, I am used to it, but I genuinely had a hard time understanding what the characters were saying.
I almost deleted it without continuing after that, but something made me come back to it, and I am glad I did. Once the MC got to the factory, it got a lot better. There is an actual plot, though a little hard to believe, but it has potential for a lot of sexy events to come. The scene where the MC saw the "top of the line" computer with 16 MHz CPU, and 640 kB RAM!, was pretty funny to those of us that actually remember those days, haha.
Artem, the MC, is a little annoying with his personality, but perhaps that is just the difference in culture or the translation. Olga is wonderful as your mysterious boss, and is the real standout character for me. The models are quite unique, and to me very beautiful, mostly (except for the female janitor, which looks odd), and a nice change from the models we usually see around here.
It is a little too new to really know what to rate it, but as a first update I am very impressed. All in all a great effort. I love the scenery and the focus on the 80's time period. I take 1 star off for the translation, but it is a lot better than most 3 star games here, so I would say solidly 4 stars at this point.