VN - Ren'Py - Sara - Oh Daddy Part 2 [v0.7] [Nightaku]

TLDR: The scenes are serviceable but the story is utter dog shit. The models are great and I like the aged up nympho that is Sarah has become more than I did in part 1.


I honestly don't even know where to begin with this one... After reading Part 1 I honestly thought the story could not get any worse... After a roller coaster of bad story telling, bad grammar, and just general confusion after reading this, I have a lot on my mind.

Reading this is a grand exercise in belief suspension... Starting right off at the beginning with the MCs coma time skip. Which I believe only exists for the sole purpose of giving a reason as to why time has gone by for a few years. This could have been done in SO MANY other ways! Then MC wakes up and his nurse is IMMEDIATELY his loyal girl just after doing her job and caring for him in the hospital for a few years. THEN of course her sister is a nympho who can't wait to devour MC after her first glance at him.

I could go on and on but it just devolves after that. The story feels like it is hastily being strung together for the sole purpose of having some filler dialogue and text to get you to the next scene! At one point it becomes a fucking spy thriller! I remember when it was just a story about a daughter corrupting her dad and having fun with her friends! HOW THE HELL DID WE GET HERE!?!?!

I am first and foremost a reader. I can understand the people that go into these things just looking for a quit wank, for that there are far better examples that don't have the convoluted "revenge" plot attached to it. Its a damn shame too because I enjoy the models here. They look great and scenes are short video loops but very serviceable. As character they mostly all fit the same mold. Nympho whores ready to bare all to MC by just mere mention of his name. Sarahs attitude makes sense but almost everyone else after that just feels rushed and silly.

Better than the prologue (Oh Daddy pt1). Giving Part 2 a 3.7 score as a result.

Pros:
- Animations are much better than the prologue, some with decent point of view.
- The ~3 year gap between pt1 and pt2 didn't age LIs too visibly.
- A somewhat entertaining plot, for what we are given.
- Good quality renders
- English is good enough to not detract from the game

Cons:
- The time jump between the prologue and part 2 was jarring, and unenjoyable
- Not enough character choice in what to do, how to respond, etc.
- Minimal content and scenes at the time of this review (v0.6)
- Part 1 (the prologue) had more teen content - this game has far less
- Not enough plot reveals to get a grasp on what's happening

So, where Part 1 (the prologue) fell flat, this one excels (story, animation quality). Where Part 1 excelled (teen content, hot scenarios), this one falls flat. It doesn't seem to quite hit the sweet spot between both.

It's a somewhat enjoyable play, but the possibilities that Part 1 had were far greater with the younger LIs. Hopefully that's something the developer can alter in the story to try and re-capture.

Intriguing story interspesed with hot encounters. More sophisticated than "Oh Daddy" but the girls, Sara and Kayla in particular, are deliciously hot.

Very interested to see where this storyline goes. I thoroughly enjoyed "Oh Daddy" for the scenes with Sara in particular. The existence of an underlying plot did not become apparent until much later in the story but very happy with how this is evolving.

If you like beating off to a host of ugly women (with punk aesthetics and/or manfaces), this VN's for you. For those of us who like cuties, the main LI (daughter) qualifies, and her cousin's not too bad, either (though she's completely unworthy of the super-slomo toe-to-head reveal she gets.)

The writing is poor in terms of grammar and plot holes, and it's one of those stories that seems to take place in the imaginary land of American England, with noblewomen called "ladies" but a head of state called a "president," where an aristocrat named Sir Lord Featherbottom (or some shit) steps in to save the Catholic Church from financial woes.

Somehow, this transitioned from a simple daughter-seduces-daddy story to a tale of international intrigue with power players and intelligence agencies from multiple continents.

If you can suspend disbelief and stomach ugly chicks, it's not too bad.

The game is cool: 1) The plot is interesting. 2) The visuals are not bad. 3) The animations are well done. 4) There is enough content for the game. 5) The plot develops quite actively, the author does not waste time with boring tons of text. 6) Everything works great, no lags, no crashes.
The game is worth every star.

i really enjoyed the game the story is progressing nicely without unnecessary and useless side stories its engaging and entertaining the characters are diverse and interesting and each bring there unique energy and passion i also loved that we are introduced to new characters .
the models are all really good looking and the style is captivating.
i hope to see more of this story and also more kinks being introduced such as domination humiliation NTR so all in all i really enjoid the game and looking forward to what the dev wants to bring to us.

First things first, the graphics and animations are good. Nothing spectacular, but well above average. I was a bit afraid of loli content after seeing the preview pics, but it was ok imo, for the most part. The daughter looks pretty young though, her face especially, so keep that in mind before downloading. The game deliberately doesn't mention any ages.

So, the story. There's a lot of it, like REALLY a lot. You spend 80% of the time trying to find out what happened to the MC before he lost his memories.
It's not bad, far from it, although not exactly original, but at the same time I didn't really connect with the characters because the game spends so much time on the plot that there's not nearly enough time to explore them. That's a big problem imo.

Which leads me to the second big issue I have with the game: The sex scenes and they suffer from the same problem as the characters do. They don't get enough time.
There's no build up or tension. The sex just ..... happens. I can't really explain it, the sex itself isn't bad, the dialogue isn't bad, it just feels so disconnected. Like the dev remembered that this is a porn game and needed sex in it.
What's also a problem: All the women are extremely open minded and horny. Nothing wrong with that per se, (although different personalities are definitely appreciated in a game), I certainly don't miss a naive daughter who behaves like a 12 year old, but as a result, there's no tension or taboo in any of it, which is kind of shocking giving the premise of the game. They are also all instantly attracted to the MC, so again, no build up or tension.

Something positive now. I actually liked the writing for the most part. The game gets something 95% of these games fail at: understanding that it's a VISUAL Novel.
So no explaining what's happening on screen, no endless monologues explaining the character's feelings, the game uses the visual part to show it. I really can't praise it enough for that.
The dialogue is short, but conveys all the import information without boring the player, again .

So, this review is a lot longer than I planned it to be. I think it's because I can see the potential for something really good here, but in the end it didn't convince me in its current state. I will definitely give it another try later though.

Edit: Oh, I nearly forgot. So far the game is completely kinetic. So be warned. If you want a game where you can influence the plot or who to be with or the MC's behaviour, or simply where to cum, this ain't it.

It's still early, but the plot already includes anonymous benefactors, shadowy goings-on in a monastery, and briefcases full of money. It feels a bit over the top compared to the average-Joe MC.

Models are decent; characterization is a bit shallow, but maybe will get more depth in future chapters.

(Review of v0.3 Halloween)

Animations are a bit better than those in the original game. However, porn is now much more scarce and the focus of the plot is on uncovering who's behind the disappearance of Sara and the incident with the boat that left the MC out of the picture for 2 years.

Honestly, I can't say I'm ecstatic with the way things go in Part 2 but if the developer wants to take the story this way it's up to them. I enjoy a mystery plot just as much as the next fellow but for now I don't see how this can end up making sense. I did like the rivalry between Sara and Kayla and even feel sorry for the latter at times. I suppose we'll see where this goes...

I can't believe what this game turned into! (I just played through v0.2).

The first part of this game was good, but it was just light-hearted "innocent" daddy-daughter fun. At least that's how I remember it.

Then comes "part 2" and we're tossed into a crime mystery, with Sara gone, the MC having amnesia, three years having passed... And I'm here for it! I'm intrigued. I'm invested. Not just in the lewd stuff, which is better than ever, but also in the plot.

So far I'm really loving this. The renders are close to perfection, and Sara is more beautiful than ever.

The game is generally good, the plot is normal, the characters are sexy, I think that the second part will also be top as the first one, fun with my daughter will be in this new part and in the new house we are waiting for a new version of the game

My score for Sara - Oh Daddy Part 2 is 10/10 because our beloved Sara is back with us. Sara is a perfect girl and very beautiful. I think the other characters and modeling are very nice. It seems like the story of the game is just beginning to unfold and fall into place. There is still a long way to go. . Sara's lust surprised me and I liked it very much. Thank you to the producer and supporters of the game. You should definitely continue to develop the game, my dear Nightaku friend <3

I liked the gameplay of the second part very much, you can even say that the second part is better than the first. The plot is excellent, the characters are beautiful, the environment is well made, and the first part was good too

This is a really promising start! The animations are a step up from the last game and those animations good. Can't wait to see more! The new sara look is also good. The resolution of the images and video are better than some of the other VN's on here that I have played and enjoyed.

Age ups suck, but I guess when the MC is stuck in a coma for 3 years that's unavoidable, time marching on and waiting for no one and all that. At least in this one that was done in a better thought out way than alot of (former) loli AVNs that shall remain unnamed over the past 6-8 months or so that basically just switched models and left no explanation or canon reason how or why that happened (very jarring and immersion-breaking, and pissed alot of former subs off). So Sara went from 10-11 in the prequel to 13-14 in this one (yeah, I know, both are "18" *wink wink* blah blah blah).
Aside from that this one has some of the better Daz animations, not the same 5-7yo stock positions on repeat like most. Story is, well, too early to tell (v 0.2) but there's a mystery to be solved and revenge to be taken for those into that, but put simply the MC doesn't come off as an Alpha Chad badass wanting to make heads roll. He just seems softer than baby shit when it comes to that, but maybe that will change. Time will tell how it all unfolds but unless it turns out to be one of those 50-update or never-ending AVNs with either multiple story arcs or simply devolving into fuck scenes of the month with not much story left this probably has a good 10-15 updates before becoming stale like week-old gum like those. The renders are on the upper end of Daz, not grainy at all like many AVNs probably rendered on a modded smart toaster. One LI has a hairy kitty, a nice change for once in a sea of 99.9% bald ones that are all clones of each other. Dunno why Kayla is so ugly though compared to who's supposed her sister Annie (not just mostly opposite personalities). I know she's supposed to be a goth girl or something but they look nothing alike and it's not just the piercings, tattoos and makeup.
Oh yeah and where's the incest tag? Does just finger-banging your daughter with only plans to fuck later not count as incest anymore? Or is it my definition now where it only counts as incest if you get an immediate blood relative (mom/daughter/sister) pregnant and she decides not to abort it or doesn't miscarry?

v0.2 an improvement in all aspects from previous game better renders animations and women. the age up is very much welcomed.

the dev decided to add an actual plot to this one though it seems to be outta nowhere as a continuation from the first game.

needs: MC needs to grow a pair especially to meet the demands of the new "revenge" plot point he is still a simp pushover. There needs to be an orgasm doesn't have to be fancy but some sort of transition between sex act and post completion.

EDIT:
Okay So I decided to give 0.2 a shot. This is by far better than the initial release and is much more intriguing than I had initially expected. I reserve my final thoughts for future releases, but this instantly has my calling this an easy 3.5/5. I really do hope the Dev has thought this title out and I'll continue to make edits in the future. I'll also keep my original statements up. Many of which I no longer agree with, but it should stay to show that I can have a bad take sometimes and any project can change my mind. Looking forward to future updates. BTW still think Kayla is ugly as fuck. lol.

ORIGINAL:
So far I'm not digging this new direction. After the terrible ending to Part 1 and the rocky start to Part 2 I think I'm out. I have no problem with aging up the characters. However, that could have been easily done by literally showing a black screen and stating "insert number years later." Nah, the part I have a problem with is the quite literally the out of nowhere conspiracy against the protagonist with no indication prior and the absurdity that follows within seconds of each other. Aside from that there's the fact that all the old good characters are gone or haven't appeared yet. The new "love" interest is ugly as sin and Sara, the person the title is literally named after, isn't even in the story (as of yet). The truth is seems more likely that the dev got scared about the demonetization taking place all over the place for loli characters and/or his country's laws now include him as a potential criminal so he had to wrap up the story as quickly as possible. But that would mean starting something new and leaving supporters hanging, wondering "now what" and the dev needed to string them along by giving them hope that the story was continuing instead of just starting something new.

This is all just speculation, so big grain of salt mind you. But I gave this 3/5 stars because of part 1 (prior to the end) which was actually pretty damn good. Part 2 ... well this seems more like a lesson in how to nose dive a VN as quickly as possible in my opinion. Part 2 gets a 1/5 stars from me at this point and I really have no desire finish this. But who knows, maybe I'll get proven wrong, and this will turn into a truly compelling story. I will give this another try in about 8-12 months to see where the story has gone. If it's better I'll gladly update my review to reflect that.

As of right now, if the dev wants to fix this they're gonna have to focus on the details. Explain who the antagonist is and why Sara wouldn't ask what the hell is going on and constantly be looking for the MC. The MC's story of survival needs to be a thing. That absolutely needs to be explained. How the hell did this guy survive what can only be described as complete bullsh*t. Finally, the dev needs to pretty up the main model ... a lot. If Sara isn't going to be in this for a while, reader need something to retain their interest and that ain't it.

All that aside, I sincerely hope for the dev's success and a gain in readership. Leave a review of the VN and let the dev know what you like and what you don't. Try to get some constructive feedback. And if you enjoyed this VN try to show the Dev any support you can.

The best game I have ever played! Graphically it's amazing, and the animations are very fluid. The story for the moment caught me, for its air of mystery. For the moment my stars are 5, and I hope DEV continues along this line. Impatient to see how it continues. In short, amazing.

Story is a mess and the character its named after isn't even present. Supposed to be a sequel but it seems like it might as well be completely unrelated for all the shifts that are likely to happen.

New love interest is unattractive and old ones are missing. All characters are getting shifted up an age bracket.

So far already the story is so much better than Oh Daddy. the characters are likeable and the renders are really well done. can't wait for more but i hope we are not waiting to the final chapter to find Sara, would be great to find her asap and concentrate on rebuilding the relationship