The story starts out really good, interresting premise, and a good first chapter. The writing did seem a little off at times, with some random bits thrown in from left field from time to time.
My biggest problem and the reason for the 1 star, is the sudden change in writing and pacing from the second and third chapters. The pacing seems to get hurried along, skipping some of the character development you would expect. Then all of a sudden we get a random plot twist, that really throws the whole story for a loop, executed rather poorly, in a way that seemed completely uninteresting to me.
I have to give credit where it is due, and this game at least has it's models, and animations in order. And it started out very well. Not entirely sure what caused the big shift however.
I'll revisit it again in the future to see if it gets better
My biggest problem and the reason for the 1 star, is the sudden change in writing and pacing from the second and third chapters. The pacing seems to get hurried along, skipping some of the character development you would expect. Then all of a sudden we get a random plot twist, that really throws the whole story for a loop, executed rather poorly, in a way that seemed completely uninteresting to me.
I have to give credit where it is due, and this game at least has it's models, and animations in order. And it started out very well. Not entirely sure what caused the big shift however.
I'll revisit it again in the future to see if it gets better