Version Played: 1.0
TL;DR - 'S fucking good, you should download it right now.
Characters: 5/5, simple to the point, well executed. You know exactly who the lady is, and what drives her. Tropes are used to set up the chaarcters, and convey a nice amount of info in the short time. And the dude is left a little more open and less defined, for you to put yourself in their shoes. And her design is just gorgeous.
Renders: 5/5 didn't know Skyrim could look this good. Niss is adorable, and I mentioned already, gorgeous.
Story & Writing: It's short, it's sweet, it's adorable. Well written, will read again.
The Sex: Wish her topping had made it in, perhaps a morning scene or something - but yeah, the way this story played out... it's about perfect as it is.
Mechanics and Gameplay: It's a pure visual novel, there really aren't any - for better or worse is for the player/reader.
Closing Notes & Thoughts: Yeah this is good. 5/5 recommend, Velkami is now on my dev watchlist for sure.