Unity - Onhold - Seasons of Loss [v0.7 r5] [NTRMAN]

0.7 Schoolmate:
So, to balance out the previous, failed attempt of an extreme NTR moment, the developer implemented the option of a lovey-dovey route. Hopefully, it will feature NTR in the future, otherwise he has to change his name to "1/2NTRMAN" or "NTRMAN, unless I'm not".

The other half is a blackmail setup that's immediately forgotten because it's too hard to write. She's a slut. The End. Man, I really wonder how the next chapter or game looks like. Will the next woman be a slut just like that? Who knows! Everybody before that surely was. NTR, man.

0.4 Mother:
Hm. From the son's perspective, everything is as basic as you'd expect and that's quite underwhelming or becomes annoyingly obvious at times. The revelation is quite 0% to 100% (caring mother -> slut who doesn't like you) and since the son is as baffled as the player I suppose, I'm not sure where the developer wants to go with this.
The mother's perspective makes a lot more sense in the beginning and I'm actually surprised by how smoothly the first sexual switch is displayed. But it kind of goes from there - the essential purity vs. depravity dynamic is mostly missing and the revealing moment remains poor/out of place.

The "inner slut" approach can be a nice asset but it shouldn't be the entire story, that's lazy! It works if she lives two lives, it works when the son becomes a necessity of it, it works as just an element of corruption or can work as a character background, but this alone does not form an erotic story. Or at least a creative one. It's just things we've been seeing before and maybe even will, over and over again, from a certain someone who didn't have enough clarity or patience for a truly good Adelaide Inn.

Visuals are still good enough to reach 3/5, voice acting's there, presentation, gallery, a little wink at his other game. I mean he tries, I guess.

I agree with everyone on this one. The game was rushed and I felt so bad for the kid because his mom disowned him for calling her out on her actions and not being a man about it. My expression was "well that escalated quickly" because it was like that situation happened in 2 seconds and 10 seconds later she on her own thing. Had me questioning well if you didn't raise him right what makes you so sure the next one will turn out right. What if the husband do the same shit the last husband did, pack up and leave. Leaving her to raise the child all by herself. That child would grow up to be exactly like the last one. As a matter of fact she never knew how her child feels, she dosen't know how to raise children therefor she don't deserve to be a parent. I love NTRs work, but him and his team droped the ball on this one. I hope they finish it quickly and move on to the next game.

Amazing treat from the master of NTR. The animations are constantly improving, the plot is tight, the mom is sexy, the bully is surprisingly complex. I wish it had better proof reading, but other than than: Perfect.

yeah i pretty much agree with the first review here. Adelaide is truly a gem and from a personal standpoint , NTRMAN has been missing with these recent entries. I dont understand going after a new formula with the success that Adelaide had, this game feels rushed and just a total drag. I barely read the dialogue bc it was just so boring. Bring back husband being into sharing his wife and she slowly gets into it. Im pretty sick of this young kid slut mom angle its so stupid. Still love NTRMAN but i write this review bc ik hes capable of such better work, this story is just unplayably stupid even by hentai vn standards

As usual, NTRMAN’s art and animations keep improving, but the core issue remains the same: The corruption is too fast. As noted by other people, the woman falls into depravity too quickly. The only game that does this well is Urban Demons, but that’s not NTR. If he made a game with really slow burn corruption along with this quality of art, it would be GOTY.

Dear reader,

as a person who is into NTR (cuckolding) lifestyle IRL, I cannot tell you that the story was good Unfortunately it develops at the super fast paces and it's very illogical sometimes.

I liked his previous games especially The Adelaide Inn (10/10, one of the best games in the history by this moment), but this one is lacking realism.

The art is still awesome though Nice job!

I hope the story will be rewritten and more things will be added. It will make the final product including other chapters a masterpiece!

Thank you for reading my feedback and taking everything into consideration

Sincerely Yours,
Sasha

I would say give it a try but didn't like the game as much as other works of ntrman. This one feels rushed , the art is good but story and characters are weaker than his other games I hope he finishes it quick and moves on to the next game

Another wonderful game by NTRMAN, the animations are well done, the story is pretty good, and we are just in the first arc so I expect a lot more great things from it. Honestly the NTR being unavoidable shouldn't deter you especially since this is a game made by a guy who calls himself NTRMAN, plus the NTR makes it hotter.

This is a harsh grade I know, but my god did the writing and pacing sucked hard in this one. If there's like 10 steps to tell a good NTR story, this thing skipped 9. The fall happens incredibly fast and the fallout is completely unrealistic and exaggerated, even by ntr standards which says a lot. I felt so bad for the boy, but not because of the brutality of the ntr but because he's the main character of a horrible senseless mess that doesnt make a lick of hentai sense, its just a shame. I enjoyed all his others games, and adelaide is one of the best hentai games ever made, but churning out this games conveyer belt style really dramatically affects the quality of the story specially, and this is a downgrade. This is a work in progress and will be expanded upon, I know, but I would just draw the mc hanging himself in this store and put this thing to rest, cause the foundation is almost unsalvageable. This is my first negative review on this site, but I stand by it. And two stars only because the art is great as always and the animations have been getting progressivly better since he started, so fapping to those in a vacuum is totally doable. If I could provide some advice (who cares, I know, but hear me out), slow it down a lot, dont use the "guy steals girl then puts on the internet for all to see" pattern making the whole thing pointless since the mom becomes just another ahegao dumbo that you cant even get mad at, dont make stolen characters instantly bottles of hatred that want their son (son!) to be homeless and disappear in a matter of weeks, thats so stupid and mind boggling that makes me forget the porn part and go watch some adam sandler brain dead movie. I'm ranting by this point so I'll stop; still love NTRman, gave me too many faps to hate him just for this, but complete misfire.