HTML - Abandoned - Secret Facility [v0.3a] [Noob.sissy01]

Review is for v0.2
Unfortunately a pretty bad snooze fest right now. I like where it's going, but there's just not enough to do right now.
Also, certain events feel convoluted. When you buy the collar, you have to go back to the office's to complete the vent, why does the event not just take you to the office and finish it? I, and other people, have thought the game was glitched because the item disappeared and the quest wasn't complete.
The concept is pretty good, it reminds me of the Cruise ship game, but it just really needs more.

I think this game could be outstanding and I look forward to more updates to see how it progresses. The possibilities are great and I hope that they keep working on it. Some times a game takes a few updates to really start working itself out and I believe this is one of those games.

Yet another zero-effort game using pics of real-life porn ripped from some website. What more needs to be said? Sometimes the writing in these types of games almost make them worth it, but not this time. The writing was poor, both in content, and use of grammar. Not sure if the writer was a native English speaker, but you've got to do something to dig yourself out of the hole of being a game with zero art and repurposed pics.

By the way the text look, I am pretty sure the dev use ChatGPT (or something like it) to generate the text...

Soooo.... Dialogue are really bad. Kinda sad since I like the idea, but there's limit to low effort, you need to do something.

To resume, the 'dev' did not do the writing, did not do the video and there no UI....

I will gave one star because I find it interesting that someone try to make a text game with a chatbot but except that to deserve more
ALL the text need to be redone by a Human.

this review because of lack of content and if it sandbox you should free with all the opt not limited opt i think

for further content can i give suggestion for something with a quick 10sec / less video ? more than gif image