Wasn't expecting much and I was very pleasantly surprised by the writing, nowadays I'm pretty tired of crime drama plotlines in AVNs, but this one pulls it off quite well thus far. The way that many of the LI encounters are written is also a standout, the kissing, teasing, and foreplay H-scenes I think are particularly well executed. I also like the use of splitscreen and picture in picture during H-scenes, there are a lot of games, particularly those made in Daz that would greatly benefit from those techniques.
The one real gripe I have is that I find it annoying that the MC is constantly reluctant to accept incestuous relationships despite the fact that the player has consistently made the choice to engage in such relationships. It really makes no sense for the MC to freak out about Millie giving him a BJ, when Cara has already done so multiple times. This also extends to pregnancy, if I as the player have pregnancy enabled and choose to creampie characters, it should be a given that I want that content, so the MC should have no reason to be shocked that the literally nun he's just deflowered isn't on birth control.
Ultimately, it boils down to being an issue of the MC not fully reflecting the choices of the player (and sometimes just being flat out dumb). This also causes the player to unnecessarily make the same choice(s) over and over again.