The plot honestly feel nonsensical and character is driving me insane. Jazeera "point" on why demon ruling is better for everyone is self contradictory. "Feudalism bad because upper class exploit lower class and lower class has no way to climb, compared to Demon that practice meritocracy! Lower class would have better time under demon because we don't care about human money and we don't have reason to oppress them really! Also no more royalty might make right only! Oh yeah we still have slave. Oh yeah we are children of previous demon king so we born strong lol. We also believe that everyone should do whatever they desire and the strong obviously can do more thing including oppressing people if that is their desire! Fuck the law and economy. Who need money? If you don't wanna join us you obviously afraid of being free and is sucking the dick of noble not because you realized that we would make live even more miserable for lower class"
Shit is so stupid that I wonder if she is supposed to sound like somebody that has no idea how stupid she sound. Worst part is she supposed to be written as "sound evil but make sense" character. It would make more sense if she just admit they are power hungry demon instead of playing all that "we are the actual good guy" when she can't even keep the story straight in scene.
Rowan would surprised you at how weak and spineless he are. He is like "I'm one of 6 legendary hero, the great general that is the one who carry 6 realm army on my back" and then he do stupid shit like not leaving back up plan before going to the castle, giving up finding ally immediately when one of heroes he not get along with dismiss his news that demon now can teleport, choosing to sneak attack on the demon that create the teleportation spell instead of saving his wife and telling the world that demon now can teleport, and many more shit that make me despise this character. How am I supposed to believe he is strong, smart and inspiring leader when he is non of that on screen?
Andras as other said is just creator self insert. He is so boringly "I'm THE man" that it feels excruciating that you need to read about him.
Most time I wouldn't be that harsh with porn plot but when you make a game and put all that lore in it and try to make us invested in the story and not just the porn I can't ignored how horrible the character is being handled. Art in this game is phenomenal but the story make me wanna puke. Get better dialogue writer and I think this game can still be save(and give actual choice instead of Rowan is a cuck weak boy or Andrias true alpha male or you get no scene).
Shit is so stupid that I wonder if she is supposed to sound like somebody that has no idea how stupid she sound. Worst part is she supposed to be written as "sound evil but make sense" character. It would make more sense if she just admit they are power hungry demon instead of playing all that "we are the actual good guy" when she can't even keep the story straight in scene.
Rowan would surprised you at how weak and spineless he are. He is like "I'm one of 6 legendary hero, the great general that is the one who carry 6 realm army on my back" and then he do stupid shit like not leaving back up plan before going to the castle, giving up finding ally immediately when one of heroes he not get along with dismiss his news that demon now can teleport, choosing to sneak attack on the demon that create the teleportation spell instead of saving his wife and telling the world that demon now can teleport, and many more shit that make me despise this character. How am I supposed to believe he is strong, smart and inspiring leader when he is non of that on screen?
Andras as other said is just creator self insert. He is so boringly "I'm THE man" that it feels excruciating that you need to read about him.
Most time I wouldn't be that harsh with porn plot but when you make a game and put all that lore in it and try to make us invested in the story and not just the porn I can't ignored how horrible the character is being handled. Art in this game is phenomenal but the story make me wanna puke. Get better dialogue writer and I think this game can still be save(and give actual choice instead of Rowan is a cuck weak boy or Andrias true alpha male or you get no scene).