It's a disgustingly common formula these days. Good, even great art, bad... pretty much everything else. Overall verdict is Poor, which translates into two stars. Oh, it has potential... to earn another star and become average.
But muh art!
Shut up. If your art is great, just draw a comic, stop inflicting stupid grind on us because you're inept as a game designer. If you are so insistent on producing a piece of software for some perverted reason, fine, make a kinetic novel. But no, the players must jump through a series of arbitrary hoops. This is a common theme with Russian devs (which I am 99.9% sure this dev is), they think grind and dumb minigames are valid substitutes for gameplay. They aren't. Your "gameplay" is just annoying, getting in the way of the meat of the story and lewds.
Speaking of the story... It is dumb. Too much stuff happens without any reason except "porn plot demands it". Beyond a certain limit, I can't take this seriously, and the story stops working for me. Skip skip skip skippity skip! Writing in sex scenes is nigh nonexistent, which isn't a surprise to me given the state of writing in general.
Overall, the game just gives off the impression of lazy aside from the art aspect. Yes, the scenes are nicely animated, but at the same time some NPCs don't have portraits, and there are no more of them than 10 in total! Hell, one vendor doesn't even have an NPC, it's just an empty cart that somehow accepts your money. Just what the fuck? My impression is that too much effort went into animating, and 95% of the game is left barebones.
Oh, and if anyone's wondering WTF is going on with [RPGM]+[Ren'Py] tags, it's a Ren'Py game made to resemble (mostly visually) RPGM for some reason. It has turn-based combat, and it has zero depth. Another example of this dev wasting their time reinventing the wheel, and wasting our time trying to make us use that wheel.