VN - Ren'Py - September 19 [v0.3] [MyDots]

Review as of [v0.3
Be warned if you do not like alternate reality / universe or Iseaki stories you will not like this one. The prologue is done really damn good but then the story changes direction. into a alternate reality / universe at first I thought it was a dream. I would of liked it more if it didn't have that story line but I also like it because I find the world and story real interesting.

For me this is a gem of a FMC game because it feels more story focused and im not bothering to think about who I want to bang or romance for once in a FMC. As well it doesn't seem to be a corruption game so far which is rare.

Also I just really love the model and character of the FMC

Be warned tho the prologue is dark

There is some grammar mistakes here in there where I had to re read a sentence cause it seemed there was a word missing or one that shouldn't be there but wasn't all that often.

What is this dev doing? Seriously... the first half I was ready to throw 10 stars at this!! I thought finally we are going to get a serious game with a heavy plot... but instead we get a suicide attempt, wake up in some alternate universe where everything is all Topsy tervy flipped on it head.. I just found myself skipping through half this ditzy crap.

My advise, trash all this stuff back to the point where she runs away and create a real plot.. sink or swim. Does she pull herself out of the pits of hell or get swallowed by the beast? At least that's what I wanted, not whatever this is.

Gosh, that's what I was looking for! The game itself is very entertaining, has beautiful models, and has an interesting history that made me excited for more. It was definitely a great start!
Keep up the good work!

the game is super, you have made a psychological emotional plot, I have emotions and feelings to experience the main character and the music is very atmospheric and everything in general is taken very well presented and done

This story starts out as a good adult drama and then suddenly turns into a farce about either zombies, mutants, or witches flying on a broomstick. It felt as if I had bought a ticket for Richard Wagner, but ended up at a children's matinee about the Ninja Turtles. Disaster. I wanted to know the fate of the main characters, but instead of it I got into a dream, in which I fainted, and in fainting I began to see hallucinations, and all this for half of the game!

People look unnatural. The eyes are too big, anatomically incorrect. It feels like the developer used neural networks trained on anime, but couldn't adjust them correctly for photorealism. The protagonist's father is so ugly that he ruins the whole game. Alpha's eyes are the same color as if he spent half his life on Arakis in Dune.

I kept this game in my Favorites folder, thinking that finally there was a game for grown women, not teenage boys. And here we are again. Mutants. Blasters. Experiments. Apocalypse.

Very interesting game so far.

Renders are beautiful and the heroine I really like so far. Starts off meek but already showing some signs of growth.

Story is interesting. It starts off making you think it will be a classic F-corruption game and quickly turns to a fantasy element --but it kind of works. I just finished watching the TV show "From" and this gives me some of the same vibes.

My main hope for this story is that it doesn't turn out to just be some "purgatory" or "all in her head" and she actually got isekei'd.

Translation is a little rough for now but understandable and doesn't greatly detract from immersion.

Short summary:


This game has pretty renders. That’s it. The story is badly written, all of the characters except MC are despicable for no reason. You have no choices or options. Due to the quality of renders, this might be worth checking out much later down the line.



Good Things

• Good use of light and post-production
• Pretty renders

Bad points

• The story doesn’t make much sense
• Bad writing
• Revolting side characters
• Inexplicable actions
• Zero choices

Very good quality of renders, positioning and sound effects, but story very depressed and didn't have signs of light in future, all characters who interact with MC looks like persons from sect of maniacs. End of 1 chapter turns all in strange way and make confused. In game should be warning, to not playing, for people with very bad mental health right now! In total game have good potential, but needed in some hatred/violence - light/positive story reworking, because after ending play 1 episode u have very bad feelings, what is can make stopping you return in the game in futures updates. But I hope that the Author will listen to all the feedback and create a great project. I wish all the best

Promising start for this interesting and quality game
Female Protagonist is my kind of fetish too!
and the quality of render is top notch
Character designing is really realistic and beautiful!

Can't wait for more

The novel is saturated with some hatred of the men, all men are bad, all bad deeds towards the girl are committed by them, the renders are not bad in places, but the plot is too stupid and goes from one extreme to another. No positive characters around, just a lot of bullying and trying to rape the main character. Just cringe

Okay, that was actually really good first update, the ending was bit of a surprise, I am hoping of lesbian content path is added in the future as I think, lesbian path and a straight path would make this game one the better ones on here, I am glad the writer did not go down the path that made the fmc a slut or an easy sex object, it looks so far, going to be a really decent story

The renders look really good, hopefully down the road, they will look even better than they do now, but I have no complaints over the renders

My only negative on this so far is the text size, the text is slightly too small, specially with part of the background being white, it's makes it kind of hard read the text, if the text was slightly bigger the text would be okay

Visual Novels with a story to tell, a story that gives a real meaning to a game matters to me big time, I don't like games that make female protags sluts and easy sex objects, So I am really glad this one is not one of those, girl sees guy, girl open legs type of game, well, I hope it's not on future updates, I hope there will be a lesbian path added as that will be more my playstyle that I prefer

I have no complaints for this devs first game, they should be proud that they are making something that a lot of people will enjoy and support, I hope this grows as it's something new for a change

Plausible plot. MC is not a pretty girl, all the guys and girls around her are prettier. And as you'd expect, they don't want to hang out with her. It's very much like real life. I like bad boy romance. Plays like this are very rare. Good art. Speeches, too. The emotions are very exciting. There are some flaws - the MC's father looks like her grandfather. But that's nothing.