VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sex Therapy [v1.0] [SGDP]

PROS
+ Art style is pretty good, especially Sophie looks pretty darn great, she is straight-up gorgeous.
+ Render quality is pretty good.
+ Song/Music choices were good, but they tend to cycle too much.
+ Sex scenes have animations with a couple of different angles/positions.

CONS
- The story is kind of poorly written. First of all, hence the name I was waiting for MC to be a couple's therapist, and the story revolves around that, but instead, MC's crush from years ago called him, and she & her husband told MC his ex told them he was amazing in bed, they didn't had any proper sex for 6 years, told she can't get wet at all, and asked for MC's help. That already screams poor writing, but if this is not enough there is a big elephant in the room about how they couldn't fix this problem for 6 years, a problem can be fixed with just the guy focusing on her pleasure instead of constantly trying to stick in her with no build-up at all. They even told me he didn't ever give her cunnilingus or never fingered her, never kissed her neck, her body, etc, like seriously how this is supposed to make any sense?! And then we have weird details about her having a huge crush on MC years ago as well, but thinking he wouldn't look at him, and getting together with his current boyfriend instead, at least MC had good reason to not ask her out since she had a relationship with her current boyfriend, but her reasoning is just dumb.
- At least there could be a small ending, but there is nothing.
- Sex between MC & Sophie happened too fast and felt quite rushed.
- Sex scene animations are not great, the frame per second is a bit low, and physics looks a bit meh as well.

VERDICT
Well, this is a pretty short game with pretty good render quality, hot female characters, and average animations, along with a poorly-written story, which is impressive since it's so short failing that short game story is hard...

This one is mediocre falling on the wrong side of the line. The story is pretty bad, not only it's poorly written, it just moves way too fast and in a completely unbelievable way. Characters are plain and boring, dialogue is uninspired and so on. There are no choices to make really, so it really is strange that such a controlled and obviously railroaded story gets to be so bad.

Render quality is pretty good though, with characters looking hot, even if some angles, poses and things are a bit strange. Animations are decent, not incredible though. I turned off the music and there seemed to be no other sounds. But at least it had no bugs, which is nice.

So, all in all, it's short and characters are hot but that's all it has going for it.

This is a decent short neotori story. Visuals and animations are good but the UI for viewing everything is a little clunky. The writing is okay and there is some nice teasing dialogue but things aren't super fleshed out and i would have probably given this another star if there were 1 or 2 more sessions before the finale.
definitely worth checking out though and frankly would be a nice base for a longer game.

Before anything else, entire thing is a really really short (15~ mins, give or take) netori stuff about you stealing her from her boyfriend, and overall it looks nice and couple scenes that are there are alright.

HOWEVER.

For something so small there is an inexcusable amount of missed spacebars, grammatical mistakes and lack of proofreading just putting the script into word for 3 minutes would fix this, i don't need perfect grammar in long projects but for something so short it's ridiculous.

More importantly, however, while the premise sounds reasonable, the actual experience is a fever dream. There is a couple where boyfriend acts like an asshole, never satisfy a girl, and they overall are not shown to have any decent relashionships. In the same couple there is a complete supermodel girlfriend who never heard about an erogenous zone despite giving BJ's to said boyfriend. Best part? They live together like this for SIX YEARS. There comes a point in suspending the disbelief where it all comes crashing down and become just a pile shattered nonsense over which you roll in hysterical laughter. Honestly, author could give this "script" 20 more minutes in writing room, make it more believable and i would have much less issues with it. I do not comprehend why zero effort was put in it if it was made for patreons.


This is a very subjective part, but the only good thing i can say about music is you can turn it off within 3 seconds of hearing it. I did not, however, since i was wondering if the next song will be as terrible as previous one or worse, kind of like a twisted High Low card game. Maybe someone will enjoy it, for me music in particular was an unmitigated disaster all the way through.

Girl model is nice and scenes are pretty nice as well though.


Overall more than anything i was just baffled by how little effort was put into making this a presentable, clean and coherent experience, when it would barely take any time considering it's size.

"Get cucked nerd!" has never been a truer statement. It felt like this was a reminder to engage in foreplay and get her off before you dive in.

The LI is hot and you get a lot of good angles. I wish there was more.