VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Sexual favor [v1.1] [SS]

Good renders. Now all the creator needs to do is to find someone who's able to write a story and who does speak English.

It's not a game, there's no interactive elements. For me personally, a random sex scene without any context is not worth the download.

For [v1.1] [Complete]
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I love short games, but this is very short.. possibly the shortest VN I've ever played.... about 6 minutes tops on Auto play.
Regardless of other low star reviews, I downloaded this for the [Cuck] and [BBC] tags.
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Anyone can see that the Dev spent most of their time on the female's looks (Mia), she absolutely stunning, so how she ended up the ugliest husband we will never know - Husband looks like a 60+ year old with young skin ..lol. And we can tell there's no glass in his Dollar Tree glasses lol
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The BBC is quite handsome at first but his looks doesn't stay consistent to the end. Ugh, cock with no veins :c
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There's only 1 fuck scene and is done very poorly like the Dev got bored of making this VN before calling it "Complete" and hurried the process.
Husband is impatient to see his wife fucked by a BBC and gets aggressive about it and puts wife on the spot without organising anything with her first, and then, the stupid dialog says something like "Mia does this to save her marriage" "O_O" What sort of dumbfucked attitude is that ??!!
Honestly, the Dev was not in the right mind nor motivation to make this mostly shit story.
And then, on top of that, the visuals abruptly ends to main menu while BBC is still halfway up Mia's snatch. "O_O".
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Giving this a 2/5 is being too generous, but 1 goes to Mia's looks, and another 1 goes to the thoughtfulness of the Dev by not making this another too-wordy VN - there are a few scenes where they say nothing at all because we're reading the body language, which I wish most VN's would do instead of over explaining the story 3 times over.
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Yes, it's worth the download if you're into Short Stories, BBC, Consent-Cuck, and just for the curiosity. But not worth keeping on your HD.

There is no setup no introduction no world building. The characters don't even seem human in the way they talk(barely)to each other. Scenes jump from one another abruptly without a sense of pacing.

The renders are good and the girl is pretty but apparently this can't be attributed to the developer so any meaningful future content or effort to make this in to a real story can't be guaranteed.

few spelling mistakes
Story needs improvement and little bit magic touch. after all good for ntr guy. dev need to work very hard. I really liked it.
Good for a quick fap

coding is bad you should click like a long game but game is so short :')
there is no gameplay , just a basic vn
some ready poses
normal render quality
bad writing ..engrish level sht
basicly daz porn comic but not a good one

It was rather reminiscent of a dwarf selling candy: Short and sweet. it's as the description says. There are a few spelling mistakes in the text itself but the story is understandable. Two friends, black guy likes the white guys girl, she has been trying to get pregnant...put two and two together and there you go, it's all breakfast cereal baby, real milk leaking over the coco puffs type stuff and the girl is packing two scoops of booty flakes and looking at the CG you'll agree they are packed with flavour!

Good for a quick download and look.