VN - Ren'Py - Shaddolands -WHID [v2.0] [Shaddo]

v2.0

• Story's a Mess: The plot's all over the place, and the relationships? Forget about figuring 'em out.
• Didn't Stick the Landing: They tried something edgy, but it flopped and just got confusing.
• Eyesore Visuals: The backgrounds are wonky, and the characters look kinda...off. Just weird.
• Sound's Awful: Either it's dead silent, or the sound's just grating. No good vibes at all.
• Dialogue's a Dud: The characters talk like robots, and they're all kinda boring anyway.
• Basically a Hot Mess: This thing's rough around the edges in, like, every single way. Hard to say anything good about it, really.

Great start. I was not expecting it to dive in as fast as it did. That is fantastic in my books. No long drawn out story with just teasers but full blown engagement. As the previous review mentioned there are a few render issues but no big deal to me. The parts that matter are fine.

Good start for a beginning developer. renders are of decent quality and overall ok writing.

I've played the "original" and i think this is pretty close to it's quality as a remake. The "original" creator unfortunately ran out of ideas as he "borrowed" them of a forum. And his new content just paled in comparison to the stories he "borrowed".

So with that said i'm looking forward to you making your own story and seeing how that develops, as that is one of the more important parts .

It's hard to really give this a rating as the story was already thought out. There's some small inconsistencies with the renders here and there and some of the facial animations are a little bit off. But what's there is decent and overall i enjoyed it. Good job and best of luck in the future.