Needs a lot more work before it should have been posted tbh. Large swathes of bland soul-less chatGPT written text and the occasional "human" written content (mostly the 'sex' scenes) have been thrown together and not checked for spelling and grammar.
Sex scenes are rushed, nonsensical and bland. I went to the gym to find someone working out naked, this wasn't commented on in game at all, and them she walked up and randomly pulled my pants down... that's bad writing.
Add some dialogue and tension to the sex scenes. I'm sure ChatGPT can help you out with this, since it has done everything else.
but yeah definitely should have cooked this one a lot longer before releasing to the wild.
Sex scenes are rushed, nonsensical and bland. I went to the gym to find someone working out naked, this wasn't commented on in game at all, and them she walked up and randomly pulled my pants down... that's bad writing.
Add some dialogue and tension to the sex scenes. I'm sure ChatGPT can help you out with this, since it has done everything else.
but yeah definitely should have cooked this one a lot longer before releasing to the wild.