HTML - Shades [V0.1.2] [Rator]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    User1655489

    Needs a lot more work before it should have been posted tbh. Large swathes of bland soul-less chatGPT written text and the occasional "human" written content (mostly the 'sex' scenes) have been thrown together and not checked for spelling and grammar.

    Sex scenes are rushed, nonsensical and bland. I went to the gym to find someone working out naked, this wasn't commented on in game at all, and them she walked up and randomly pulled my pants down... that's bad writing.

    Add some dialogue and tension to the sex scenes. I'm sure ChatGPT can help you out with this, since it has done everything else.

    but yeah definitely should have cooked this one a lot longer before releasing to the wild.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Wink3319

    This is a very nice start. It is very early on but it is a very promising start. I love games with female protagonist and lesbian content and this story features both prominently. So this is great. There are already a number of nice choices. But this being early on, many branches have been prepared but not yet worked out. So some patience is required still. But this looks like it will turn into a very nice project.